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Low Ridah Remixx

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A collab/remixx between Los Angeles, Cali's Mz Syk D (courtesy of Still Modest)
and Chicago, Illinoiz Kurse and Viral (courtesy of A.M.E.)

Mz Syk D - hook & 1st verse
Kurse - hook & second verse
Viral - 3rd verse

Mixed By: Mz Syk D, Kurse & Viral
Produced By: L1 Entertainment

*Track to be featured on 2 Street Albums...
Mz Syk D's "The Bitch Next Door"
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Kurse's "Negative Intention"

Enjoy. Feedback appreciated.

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

and still i dont like this chick, her voice and flow is annoyin, your verse was dope, obviously it was back when you let a piece of leak out, virals verse was pretty tight as well.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

yea lol the chick ain't real enough for me n her lyrics r pretty basic, overall i liked the track tho
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Post by Kurse »

Well keep in mind...Ol' girl just turned 17. She's still perfecting her craft. But L1 produces alot of her music for her and they've got production skills as well as a few good artists over there. With the right guidance and a couple more years of handling her biz...she'll be a dope femcee.

I know Ghost has gotta be one of the only few who remember my leak from way back when, but this is actually my 2nd collab with her. (This track being alot better than the 1st we did) But I give her credit for her age and desire towards the game.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

she's got potential, age has nothin to do with it lol.. some people grasp the concepts and elements quicker then others.. all u can do after that is master it
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

notta bad track..dont really like the concept but for what its worth it wuz bumpable..that girl wasnt horrible but u can tell she's on the track at least,kurse ur verse had the best delivery and viral i feel had the best lyrics,nice lil transition on the hook 2,decent track stay droppin
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Post by LadySam »

i like this song the girls voice is abit annoying in the hook but she just needs to work on it, virals verse was great.
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Post by MesaR »

i acutally like the chicks voice, the lyrics are pretty basic but her inner rhymes helped it sound more pro.

kurse this was good bro, deff one of my fav tracks.. your verse and swag was a step above the chick's

viral - this was nice, slow and catchy sounding to me it's pretty dope this track was ill in my eyes.

good shit
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Post by drunken jesus »

whoever mixed her verse needs shot in the face that echo/reverb is horrible(if it's added it may just be her set-up) her verse wasn't too bad overall she can't harmonize too well for the sound shes going for and her flow needs work

hook - she can't sing at all, the "low ridah" part on the hook could've been done better, should've had viral do it his voice is a tad smoother when you do the whisper type delivery like you did on it your vocals tend to distort and sound more harsh than intended, volumes a lil low on it too, i don't like the "remix" part should've mixed it more like the low ridah part i ain't feeling the phaser type effect on it

kurse verse - braille line was corny, mixing on the highs was a lil too harsh, overall a solid drop

viral verse - delivery could've been stronger at points your vocals kinda muffled or trailed off volume-wise, solid verse overall though
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Viral »

thanks for da feed yall...more would be appreciated!
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Post by Cee4 »

this was pretty good. a nice smooth track. the girls verse was alrite. i think her voice is more suited to rappin than singin. i wasnt feeling the hook. Kurse dropped a standard verse-good flow and decent lyrics. virals verse was pretty good too. all 3 rode the beat well. like i said the only real negative point was the hook. it coulda been a good hook if it was sung better
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