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I exchange fates with niggas that's destined to die
Take them away from a life infested with crime
I never made it to the gates, cuz I was second in line
So for that fact, if any cat testing mah shine
Imma send him to either heaven or hell ill let the devil decide
Lots of competitors tried to get with my general vibe
But a dude like Gutta had to place em on the medical side
The Exception is I, never die, I get respect cuz I strive
I go to war without a gat, and niggas expect I survive
Put my head to the sky, its time to accept the truth
I stay ahead of dudes, my beretta sendin tha biggest men up to the heavens, duke
In these streets it's easy to get plugged in the evil of illegal substance
But its hard to escape from the fate when u was conceived in drugs, kid
Its like im sellin what I stand for, to make records and advance towards
A better life where we can score, and stay away from food stamps and wars
Im something you cant ignore, I stay flashy, my girl nothin less than a camera whore
Im straight asking the Lord, why these lil niggas think they can accept death?
When I come around gun em down, BLAOWWW!!! Nigga, Catch Wreck!


NY GIANTS BABY!!!!!!!
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Post by Arvincible »

lol yeah go giants!

this was real nice man, the flow was smooth and ur rhyme scheme was well designed
ur shit is always a good read
keep droppin
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Post by Gutta »

thanks for the feed, i was tryin 2 structure it more this time insteada just puttin in multies

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this shit was smooth, nice to see you back around
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Gutta »

thanx for da feed ghost, i appreciate it

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Post by Brah-Vo »

Yo gutta, this piece was koo.
The multies were nice and ya flow was better then usual.
most deffo your structure improved and the lyrics was genereally nice.
Your slowly deviating away from g shit. Which means u got alotta versatility.

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Imma send him to either heaven or hell ill let the devil decide
Lots of competitors tried to get with my general vibe
But a dude like Gutta had to place em on the medical side
The Exception is I, never die, I get respect cuz I strive
I go to war without a gat, and niggas expect I survive
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by Gutta »

bruh thats still g shit, its just a different style of g shit. deepa shit

thanx for da feed tho

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Post by Brah-Vo »

word. leave a brotha some feed man.
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Post by Arvincible »

me too nikka
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