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Omega Bill
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Post by Omega Bill »

Good shit.

Flowed really well and even though it didnt stick to one thing, it worked really well because it flowed together even though you touched on numerous things in this drop.

Definetley liked this piece man.
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Still Lookin For My Brighter Days it Seems i'm Just A Flight Away
i Sit And Think To Myself What inspires Me Ta Write Today


Forget Tha War in iraq Just Kill Tha Fuckin Children
They Had A Million Chances To Leave And They Still in Tha Buildins



When Tha .44 Cock You'll Be Seein More Shots Then Sluts Dude
Chrome is Tha Only Way You'll Have More Shine Then Ya Guts Do




Hip-Hop? All i'm Ever Hearin is Erotic Sex With Dimes
Young Cats Coppin Guns i'll Confess i Bought A Vest With Mine
it's Time i Stop These Biters All i See is Lames... All Sharks
Kinda Like A-Rod And Griffey We Aint in Tha Same Ball Park


it's Like i'm in Prison Tha Way i See Through Bars
it's A Fact Dont Ask How But i'll Get To Tha Front Page
Pictures Of Presidents Starin Down My Pumped Gauge

i Hadda put all These Lines down Son..

i Couldnt say i Only liked one Bar out This piece LoL

yooo i Think your Title Suits Dis Piece fine Son.. u Fuckin Expressed ya Mind out da Ass LOL

KEEEP DROPPIN MY NIGGAH
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Post by Haz »

By The Way.. u Had Some Nice Punchlines in Here.. flow Wus Smooth.. Multies Wus On Point.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

TGYH,
probably my favourite piece from you so far
(yeh i went through your old shit shit so :))

U had nice multie4s, flow was on point and you sent the message across in a very aggressive style, moreso then your old pieces.
This was a great piece my dude.
Keep up bruhz ^_^
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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