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Classic material, every sentence is filled with intensiveness
no matter how dense it is, the concepts are adventurous
I was born with a tremendous gift to pen a script
must of been the prescriptions in "high" percentages
the bends and twists that made me a transcendentalist
even my vocabs a pretentious prick and a condescending bitch
media sensationalist interventionists just more evil demonstrations
I'm perfect as ever, even the religious say my verses are better
ur fat, I mean ur "body has more mass" than all the Churches together
your verses on the surface are clever under are worthless n dumb
first it's a gun, then u got a felony, where you purchase it from?
the circus is done, i make nerd kids to nervous to run
wordless and numb, you revolve around me like the earth to the sun
I sign your death certificate make you seem less significant
inside ur sinking ship, drowning in water, drinking it
I slaughter every increment of the flow, figuratively speaking
and party Monday through friday bigger than the weekend
I see you squeaking your shoes, like the Navy deep in the blues
hoping your keeping it cool when I'm speaking to you
thought you'd become increasingly aware that your the geek
beware of me, I'm speaking with a stare of deceit
I can turn 180 degrees, got the eyes of the sea
with my philosophy, my brain will cross you at 90 degrees
your hostility makes you open to attack like the ocean
ur amazing show of courage, lacks in emotion
my blazing flow is dangerous, rages of fire unescapable
lyrically, your not capable of being sensational
I'll get up in your face like a razor
2-0, i just scrapped ya, don't challenge, I'm greater
I'm the Illest, everybody else is after that
like Rakim you can't deal with the after math

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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

this wuz pretty sick plex..krazy vocab as usual and flow wuz good,good 2 see u droppin that hard shit again..i loved this whole part below

I'm perfect as ever, even the religious say my verses are better
ur fat, I mean ur "body has more mass" than all the Churches together
your verses on the surface are clever under are worthless n dumb
first it's a gun, then u got a felony, where you purchase it from?
the circus is done, i make nerd kids to nervous to run
wordless and numb, you revolve around me like the earth to the sun
I sign your death certificate make you seem less significant
inside ur sinking ship, drowning in water, drinking it
I slaughter every increment of the flow, figuratively speaking
and party Monday through friday bigger than the weekend
I see you squeaking your shoes, like the Navy deep in the blues
hoping your keeping it cool when I'm speaking to you
thought you'd become increasingly aware that your the geek
beware of me, I'm speaking with a stare of deceit
I can turn 180 degrees, got the eyes of the sea
with my philosophy, my brain will cross you at 90 degrees
your hostility makes you open to attack like the ocean
ur amazing show of courage, lacks in emotion

SICK^..i wuz like damnn..keep it up dude,the other parts i didnt mention were good as well,but thhat part there just caught my eye n kept me readin on,good shit
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I'm perfect as ever, even the religious say my verses are better
ur fat, I mean ur "body has more mass" than all the Churches together
your verses on the surface are clever under are worthless n dumb
first it's a gun, then u got a felony, where you purchase it from?
the circus is done, i make nerd kids to nervous to run
wordless and numb, you revolve around me like the earth to the sun
I sign your death certificate make you seem less significant
inside ur sinking ship, drowning in water, drinking it
I slaughter every increment of the flow, figuratively speaking
and party Monday through friday bigger than the weekend

^^^ Liked That Lil Piece of ya Verse Da Most..


"Inside ur sinking ship, drowning in water, drinking it"
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Post by Gutta »

more mass then all the churches together was a really dope line

good piece plex
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Post by Omega Bill »

Good shit man. I like how you use a broad vocab in your drops and don't try to dumb down yourself.
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Post by Arvincible »

yo the flow and structure went real nicely.
the topic...idk i guess this isn't a drop that really has one except proving once again that you are talented at this.
annnd that church line was cool too haha
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Post by Brah-Vo »

this a dope piece.
Probably one of the more aggressive writtens i've read from you
sick wordplay, great flow and the multies were good.

Who's this directed to?

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I'm perfect as ever, even the religious say my verses are better
ur fat, I mean ur "body has more mass" than all the Churches together


the circus is done, i make nerd kids to nervous to run
wordless and numb, you revolve around me like the earth to the sun
I sign your death certificate make you seem less significant
inside ur sinking ship, drowning in water, drinking it
I slaughter every increment of the flow, figuratively speaking
and party Monday through friday bigger than the weekend
I see you squeaking your shoes, like the Navy deep in the blues
hoping your keeping it cool when I'm speaking to you
thought you'd become increasingly aware that your the geek
beware of me, I'm speaking with a stare of deceit
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by complexity »

It's subliminals at a few people to be honest.

Two or three are quite obvious.
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ones me, right?
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