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YoungHalf
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My First Drop, Check Me Out

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When Tha Tool is Cocked i'll Let it Blam Kid
Damn Kid My Styles Hot And Tha Flow is Rancid
i'll Let Loose With A Tech 'Til it Starts Rapein Ya Friend
i'll Rob Ya Fuckin Chain And Give it Back Just Ta Take it Again
if Ya Wanna Throw Fists You'll Be Quick Ta Get Ya Ass Kicked
i'll Eat Some Batteries Turn Reptile Then Start Spittin Acid
i Aint Hatin On A Chick But i'll Be Quick Ta Pull A Bitch Man
When i'm Onna Track i Keep Em Sweatin Like They Rockin Wrist Bands
i'm Gonna Sit Back And Watch Ya Run Fa Ya Life And Scream
Let You Pick Tha Weapon You Can Get Caught With A Knife Or Beam
i'll Poke Ya Man Like Pokemon Be Quick Ta Pull Tha Hyper Beam
Go Ahead And Test Me On A Track Cuz i Roll With Tha Nicest Team
i Dont Gotta Normal Sway i Gotta Awkward Swerve
My Punches Are Uppercuts That'll Leave Ya Lost Fa Words
Keep Playin Harry Potter And You'll Be Quick Ta Catch A Magic Beam
i Better Start Writin "Romeo And Juliette" Cuz it'll Be A "Tragic Scene"
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Post by Omega Bill »

Ehh, you got potential. Personally I can't stand when someones first drop is about "Gangsta life". That's just me though.

That and I didn't like how you rhymed beam 3 times...thats just me.

But you got potential. Keep droppin.
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Post by YoungHalf »

Thanx Man, an chea i feel ya,
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Post by Haz »

Yo Can We Can Get TheGuyYouHate.. In Dis Thread.. To Identify Wudd Verse Of His Dat is^^^???

Cause he Dropped Dat Before Lmmfao i Have a Good Memory Dont Try Bitin on Dis Site..
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Post by Omega Bill »

No shit? I wasnt around when he dropped that. What the fuck.

Fuckin bitin ass.
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one word........Fag
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Post by Kurse »

whats up wit all these god damn biters coming on the site all of a sudden!? is it just me...or does it seem like these weakass niggaz are suddenly coming outta the woodwork!?
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Its a Cycle
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Post by Nasty-Caramel69 »

lol biterz
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I Got U Homie
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Post by Arvincible »

Wow haz good shit lol

Who the fuck is this bitch anyways? Did u think it was cool to steal a drop from someone here? Cuz I don't think u cud away with it here... Well anyways, u really kno how to make an entrance kid, now half the active people on this site don't like you already.
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Post by Momeijah »

id Keep an Eye On Him But im Too Lazy.

Anyway Nice Piece JJ, Good Flow And Multis Etc.

Oh Wai--- lol.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

i dunno, but i'd be flattered if someone stole my shit, but wasnt a bitch about it. Lmao.
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