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Omega Bill
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Whats in the dark
Whats touching your hair
You turn around
Are you scared?
All you see is darkness
Then you hear a laugh
Is this some kind of trap
Look at the shadow move behind you
Is this a dream or is this true
The smell of blood runs through your nose
You get chills right down to your toes
Something grabs you by the throat
You cant breathe you start to choke
You feel a blade around your chest
This is a dream its just a test
You pinch yourself
You try to wake up
You are done, enough is enough
You dont wake up, this isnt a dream
And now your throats slit you cant even scream
You try to get away but he holds you tight
Your body is now part of the night

Old poem I wrote a long time ago. One of my shittier ones.
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Post by Arvincible »

haha sounds like a nightmare.
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Post by Haz »

i liked the Structure For this poem Even if It wus one of Ur Shittier Ones..
i caught on to the whole thing real Quick.. and the Endin wus Good..like the endin line Wus Jus a
good way to end it.. It All Went Thru Nice..
Good Shit..
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