JUS MY THOUGHTS

[escapade]

THA LIFE I LIVE IS SO STRESSFUL
I GOTTA STAND UP WHEN THE REST FALL
U KNO WUT THEY SAY YA WORD IS YA BALLS
THATS Y I KEEP IT TRUE AND STAY WIT A CAUSE
CKUZ IF U GO AGAINST YA WORD THEN U GO AGAINST THA GRAIN
THATS WHEN U REALLY BEGIN 2 FEEL THE PAIN
CALL ME THA KING CALL U FEEL THA REIGN
ESCAPADE N THIS NIGGA BOUT 2 GO INSANE,

E2THAE

[Glamtrash]

To me this sounds more like a short rap verse than a poem.

I have never heard anyone say their word was their balls, but that could be just me...I'm not entirely sure.

It's not a bad lil verse, but there was no emotion.

Also, I think i found a typo...I think the line is supposed to go:

"call me tha king can you feel the reign"

...Just tryin to help.

Good shit dude, just not poetry.

[Haz]

Escapade u Should Collab with Dr.Suess