Bored, kinda a bad flow

[Omega Bill]

I dont call this rappin, more like lyrically flowing
Cause when I write rhymes, I'm all knowing
Im not gonna put out something used and fake
I dont rap about smokin blunts, cars, or makin cake
I write about whats goin on, and whats on my mind
Look at hip-hop today, its all the same rhymes
Everyones sayin. get like me
Get like you? I can rhyme without talkin but the V.I.P
Turn on the radio and what do you hear?
A bunch of "bleep bleep bottle of cris" in your ear
I didnt grow up like that so I dont spit like I know
I had to work to get it and make my dough
I still aint rich I aint never gonna get signed
I do this shit for fun and to pass my time
Cant sit at your house and look back at the past
Dont remember all the bad and hope memories dont last
Disgusts me to see fake rappers makin that money
Cause unlike street rappers mainstreams are sweeter than honey
Dont get no recognition unless you can make a ringtone track
They overlook the real whos on the corner makin money sell crack
Thats not the life you gotta live though but they aint taught
Then next you know 5-0 at your door cause a lil nigga got caught
14 years old sittin in a prison inside concrete barriers an no window
Couldnt just get by spittin rap without recognition with his hot flow
Nah he gotta be a criminal to prove his streets hes that good
Dont talk about peer pressure unless you live in a real hood
Droppin outta school so he can pay his ma's bill
Next thing you know his body blue and he lies there still
Momma cant believe that her baby is gone till she dies too
All because he was never taught right or wrong or told what to do

[Brah-Vo]

Yeh to me it wasn't that good.
I mean it was OK but nothing really notable for me.
I wanna see a more thought out piece from you.
Keep up.