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Rap Game ( sequence TGYH )

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Tha Rap Game And Culture In Australia And America Are Different.. But When it Boils Down Were Still Rapping.


ima kid, through-with-bibs, started rap, through abit-of-rage..
more cleaner's to-my-gigs, they way i flow and spit-on-stage.. -
guns-or-cans, both cause the stress-we-make, the pain never falls..
drugs-or-fans, we express-our-hate, through graff on subway walls.. -
we brake-emcees, from an un-real-spit, this is pure skill n talent combined
were thugs, quick to take-your-keys.. n steal-ya-whip this anit pimp my ride -
stricken-by-riches, flowing crazy, straight demolishing whackness-to-bits
Australia.. America.. Spitting-Tha-Sickness Dispite Tha Accents-And-Shit.. - Sequence

Every Pad i Take i Grab And Dig
influences Started With A Pac Fab And Big
Dont Kno Whether it Was An L Or A Pun
Each Time i Take Ta Treez i Twist An L Fa Fun
As A Youngin i Was Always Sightin Music
Stricken By Poverty But i Ended Up Fightin Through it -
My Biggest inspiration She Was A Lady From Tha Block
But Growin Up i Seen Her Get A Lil Shady From Tha Rock -
life was rough, somtimes its hopeless it seems.. and we belived
deciation is the key, hopes and dreams are waitin to be achieved -
Hip-Hops Already Dead And Tha Shitz Still Dyin
Artists That Sick in Tha Head Leavin Tha ill Cryin -
Whether it's OZ Or Tha States Kidz Still Fiend For Tha Beats
When it Comes Ta Makin Money They Always Dream Of Tha Streets
Some Tag Grafitti Others Just Let Tha Snub Walk
in Tha Club Diddy Boppin An Some Let Tha Drugz Talk -
Hip-Hop's Always Gonna Be Tha Same Game
Some Poppin E Others Just Slang Caine - TGYH
Last edited by MesaR on Fri Nov 23, 2007 1:24 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

glad someone fixed the structure i was just bout'ta comment on it..newayz..liked how u tryna unify the whole distance thing that wuz cool..Seq had better flow n multis,but jj u shined pretty good on this..fav bars from yall wuz..

Seq.

we brake-emcees, from an un-real-spit, this is pure skill n talent combined
were thugs, quick to take-your-keys.. n steal-ya-whip this anit pimp my ride -
stricken-by-riches, flowing crazy, straight demolishing whackness-to-bits
Australia.. America.. Spitting-Tha-Sickness Dispite Tha Accents-And-Shit.

JJ.

Hip-Hops Already Dead And Tha Shitz Still Dyin
Artists That Sick in Tha Head Leavin Tha ill Cryin -
Whether it's OZ Or Tha States Kidz Still Fiend For Tha Beats
When it Comes Ta Makin Money They Always Dream Of Tha Streets

cool shit tho guys
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Every Pad i Take i Grab And Dig
influences Started With A Pac Fab And Big
Dont Kno Whether it Was An L Or A Pun
Each Time i Take Ta Treez i Twist An L Fa Fun
As A Youngin i Was Always Sightin Music
Stricken By Poverty But i Ended Up Fightin Through it -
My Biggest inspiration She Was A Lady From Tha Block
But Growin Up i Seen Her Get A Lil Shady From Tha Rock -
^^ This Wus Pretty Kool..

Sequences Verse Made my Fuckin Eyes Hurt lmfao .. But it Wus Aiight ..

Ova All This Piece wus Pretty Strait.. i Liked The Topic..
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Post by Haz »

we brake-emcees, from an un-real-spit, this is pure skill n talent combined
were thugs, quick to take-your-keys.. n steal-ya-whip this anit pimp my ride -
stricken-by-riches, flowing crazy, straight demolishing whackness-to-bits
Australia.. America.. Spitting-Tha-Sickness Dispite Tha Accents-And-Shit..

FreeFlow i Liked That From U^^^

But somethin i Sorta thought wus Forced or i Mighta Read it Wrong
Cause it Seemed like it Fucked up ya Flow was

guns-or-cans, both cause the stress-we-make, the pain never falls..
drugs-or-fans, we express-our-hate, through graff on subway walls.. -


This part^^ otha Than Dat.. i liked Ya verse.
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