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Ur Kursed witta Viral disease Injected thru Smoke,
The Complexity of the matter is ina Sequence of Hopes,
Ima blow ya Gutta top off witta explosive package of C4,
Visit wit Jesus, talk about how Rh1nos lookin like Eegor,
Treason against IL is Tramatik only we know the Lawgix of Fin-S,
Behind the mechanics of a Mac so watch out when the Sams Stressed,
Lets battle, hit me up im SymbolikuLL, Im volatile like Domino,
We got Prophets to Street Pharmisists and B-Bear is the Knowledgeable,
Ima Hazard dude I leave ya wit down syndrom lookin like Dead Silence,
Rhymes be Razor Sharpe to cut yuh throat I head the Violence,
All the newbs be like a Menace, but loses are like EZCome,
Easy go, jus like Invincible Lyricist or that guy Neno, ONE!….
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Lawgix »

hahaha that shits sick bruh... nice job homie
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

this was ill man,u shud more if u getta chance,it wud be hotness..liked it all the way thru
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Post by complexity »

I've done three drops like this, if I recall and honestly you did it better than all of them.

The wordplay was pretty slick.

It's definitely out of your element. So, props on trying new things.

"Lets battle, hit me up im SymbolikuLL, Im volatile like Domino,
We got Prophets to Street Pharmisists and B-Bear is the Knowledgeable"

Keep it up.
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Post by Haz »

Ima blow ya Gutta top off witta explosive package of C4,
Visit wit Jesus, talk about how Rh1nos lookin like Eegor

Lmao.
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Post by B-Bear »

Yeah, agree with the rest.. haven't really seen u utilize wordplay in your verses, similar to this.. it's was fuckin sick!! NO shit.. simply impressing.. that's all i gotta say
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Post by Viral »

it was short n sweet...i liked dat shit...keep droppin....leave me some feeed!...haha
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Post by Cee4 »

This was fuckin dope. You pretty much got everyone in there plus it flowed and also made sense lol.

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Ima blow ya Gutta top off witta explosive package of C4,
Visit wit Jesus, talk about how Rh1nos lookin like Eegor,
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Shit was dope man. Sick wordplay. Jus sick. Nice work.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx fellas! appreciate all the feed

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