bored so i wrote a lil somethin

[-TraMaTiK-]

the lights on we gotta burn the wack
and hope everyone learns the facts
i aint Mark Morrison but its 'the return of the mack'
one word written is another key phrase,but
my mindz spinnin like im fucked up
but i cant be blazed,
aint touched it in months
i only be grippin this pen and rippin these men,
who think they big cuz there rockin ice n sippin some hen,
truth of the matter is im slick not insane
and my deepness iz like ya blood stickin in ur veins..

[complexity]

You got pretty creative with the rhyme scheme.

I kinda liked this.

Nice job.

[Cee4]

to me this was pretty average. kinda boring and basic. not your best drop