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Happy Hallowean Bitch! Part 1

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kill, kill, its like a evil voice in my head thats tellin me somethin
i aint answered it in a while, but today my adrelinanes buzzin
bodys twitchin, gotta make a killin, get my gloves lets get in ta it
i aint gonna take the pistol, cause the knife so much more intimate
a bitch or kid? i carefully prowl the streets, i gotta get a victim picked
i spot a girl, i think she lives alone, quietly follow her making no sign to her home
compose myself, have a cigarette, check for neighbours then cut the line to the phone
i hope shes on her own, the door`s open so i creep in and shut it slowly
proceed up the stairs, planning the murder like a date but just more gory
i peep through the door, i can hear the TV, its comin from the livin room
power in my hands, i laugh to myself cause i know she aint gonna be livin soon
the path of pyscho takes me to the door, forensics is the only thing im stressed with
as i take the knife from my wastline, i love the anticipation, its probably the best bit
i burst through the door, i hear a scream then i see the slut on the couch
im on auto pilot, a man possessed, get on the floor and bitch shut your mouth!
i smell the terror in the air, i start duct tapin her, lol she thinks im only rapin her
nah i aint wanna fuck your ugly ass, bitch what the fuck you gettin naked for!
she spits in my face and tries to escape so i grab the knife and react in a frenzy
i stab her again and again til the handle breaks, thats what u get for not actin friendly
i savour the moment, i must of stabbed her 40 times so i know she aint breathing
as she lies their body leaking, i look up and see blood splattered on the ceiling
game over, about to leave when i hear squealing, i thought she was dead maybe she is not
i turn around to finish the job, it aint her! where`s it coming from, shit theres a baby in the cot!
i move towards it and stop, its covered in blood, should i spare it or leave it dead in its bed?
fuck it why not, i pick up the blade and thrust it into its head, drop it on the floor and then i head for the door...



part 2 coming with the G.O.W drop
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did they have any good candy
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Post by complexity »

Fun story man.

"as i take the knife from my wastline, i love the anticipation, its probably the best bit
i burst through the door, i hear a scream then i see the slut on the couch
im on auto pilot, a man possessed, get on the floor and bitch shut your mouth!
i smell the terror in the air, i start duct tapin her, lol she thinks im only rapin her "

A bit graphic.

I'm pretty impressed though, it's nice to see you do something out of your normal array of talents.
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cheers for the feed plex. uppin
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

definitely waitin to read part 2 man... like the way you ended it, and it was pretty graffic all the way thru... its nice to see elavation in muh fuckas when you come back from a long stent away from the site.. nice drop dude bigs up to you kid
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thanks Ghost.
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