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I rap with punches, like fast fights, judges n crack pipes
I got smashed last night, jumped, saw it in my back sight
memory lane in the fast life, drugs at half price
white coke identified with a black light
catch five on the streets, get some exercise
come out and wreck the guy who testified
As soon I connect x and y, the rest will die
hold my weapons high, trained and specialized
even the best demise, so when it's my time to go
I'll release body, mind and soul
for now I rhyme any kind of flow, thats a minor goal
so I'm lyrically and spiritually undefinable
you wont find a finer foe, who flips a fire flow
that's why I remain desirable, with flyer clothes
through my highs n lows, I'll surprise my foes
until my eyes are closed, switch into fighter mode
in spite of those, I wont take on lighter loads
the paper still burns when I write my flows
so tonight I rose from my haunted past to expose
those who taunted raps and flows,haunt them back
suppose the demonic facts, when plex is on the track
the rest of these comic acts have gone to pass
crush emcees along my path, like you dont belong on that
and I'll personally smash anyone who says this song is wack
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Post by RH1NO »

THIS SONG IS WACK. LOL j/k

damn plex this whole thing was fire, flow was off the chain

was gonna quote some but the whole thing was balanced

probably 1 of the cleanest verses ive read in a while

good shit


think you listened ta some jay 2day 2 idk...1
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Post by complexity »

I listen to Jay everyday homie.

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Post by B-Bear »

This piece was smooth Plex, didn't catch your flow at the start, but once u got it - it's fire, stayed on point.. structure is good.. nice content.. would've been nice to hear this tear up a beat tho... that's really what i'm missin from u plex.. cause ur droppin strong pieces almost everytime.. i'd like to see u step your game up.. anyway, keep it comin!
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

even the best demise, so when it's my time to go
I'll release body, mind and soul
for now I rhyme any kind of flow, thats a minor goal
so I'm lyrically and spiritually undefinable
you wont find a finer foe, who flips a fire flow
that's why I remain desirable, with flyer clothes
through my highs n lows, I'll surprise my foes
until my eyes are closed, switch into fighter mode
in spite of those, I wont take on lighter loads
the paper still burns when I write my flows

^^ that was like one of those parts ppl go 'damnnn' 2 lol mad nice plex..liked the flow on this one better then ur last piece i must admit..buttttt solid drop none the less..closing bars cudda had more emotion behind it i believe but its ur piece u call the shots..nice drop
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