Findin my Place.....lol

[~Symbolikull~]

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Im cryin now cuz nothing inside me's found like I chose to reside inside the ground,
My prides so loud, heavens lookin down but it drowns out the sound and binds me down,
Locked in emotions, trapped in my feelins, lost in the maze of life usin rap as my healin,
Drop wit convulsions, back into stealin, watch as I take this spite abusive acts are revealed when,
Im seen as a front, but im not to be touch when greens in the blunt,
Bring peace thru a pump, not, chumps get heated deep in they guts,
In my soul theres a gapin hole, I lost my control Ghost way to go,
Gone in the moment to change the globe but pains to vague to know,
I wanna save myself thru these trials thru pages but this brains no help,
No weapons no gage -n- shells I told satan to save it, a personal place in hell,
I can sense it, the tension is makin me relentless and I have no fight against it,
Hence it, turned to a census of my mess ups so I text it as soon as my pen clicks,
Eyes are restless, sleep is what? Death of emotions beginning of dreams to lust,
Never happenin like police in cuffs, fuck the sess im steady needin this weed to bust,
Leave the trust behind, I must remind myself im an addict when I crush these lines,
Rush to find, a decent rhyme amongst this mind volatile like space dust confined,
Im never nothing more, a broken promise a shattered heart like something torn,
It's the naked truth like nothins worn, no remorse so I drink till a buzz is formed,
Left the rest to choose, its own path on where it resides and what is the best to do,
Inject my chest wit fumes, to ease my restless moods, im fucked I think im meant to lose,
What is a win? Without pride of completion of a task no wonder im feelin different again,
Theres a hint to an end, liften a pen is a release to find my father cuz I might jus listen to him…

[-TraMaTiK-]

Eyes are restless, sleep is what? Death of emotions beginning of dreams to lust,
Never happenin like police in cuffs, fuck the sess im steady needin this weed to bust,

hot as bar^..overall i really liked this piece,flow seemed 2 start off iffy but it picked up alright,multis as usual and it wasnt a boring read,good job

[~Symbolikull~]

thanx tram appreciate the feed its my first piece in like a few months....