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Gutta
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Post by Gutta »

ya im 15 myself, and my shit aint as whack as this...it never has been
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


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Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
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MesaR
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Post by MesaR »

lol i am 13, and i would say the same thing gutta
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pZy1
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Post by pZy1 »

Wit all the negative ass shit u guys have 2 say...makes people not wanna post shit...even if u don't like the ryhmee u don't gota try an play me


If got 2 the point u guys r hatin soo much...I go 2 vote on a battle an juss cause I didn't put
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Multies
Punchlines
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U can't except my vote...I said seq ripped him...that's a vote obviously I feel the other kid sucked in every catagory..that shits fair?...lol even if I abuse someone I KNOW I won't get a vote...that's juss how use roll...
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MesaR
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Post by MesaR »

look pyz ekoms and that toke there time to explain that you need improvment. and i think you toke that to heart.. look listen up if your willing to accept comments by other good emcees you will improve lots, you have potentail and the right attitude in your bars, if your willing to give illest a second shot i am sure we would be more then glad to help. right guys dontlet this little thing effect the view you have on a emcee.
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B-Bear
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Post by B-Bear »

We're just trying to find that one braincell of yours and actually learn u something, but that's obviously impossible... do you even know what an inner multie is? or multies? give us some examples of a wordplay, inner-multies and multies.. cause like ekoms said, if u don't know the diffenrencem, then we shouldn't be havin this discussion..
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MesaR
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Post by MesaR »

^^ dude give the kid a brake who cares
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pZy1
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Post by pZy1 »

Lol r u guys serious...juss fuckin rap...there r soo many different styles..flows..word plays out there...look I aint here for no lessons I feel wat u guys r sayin but...u make it like I'm horrible or sumthin
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Ambiguous Realm
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

lol no ur not horrible.. ur just not as good as u make urself seem to be... u came on here actin like u were the best.. then just becuz i said a few negative things about ur verse u got offended n tried to point out something u had no idea about... all i'm saying is before u actually judge someone u should be good enough to judge urself just equally.. when i read this it i judged it based off of the average lyricist.. which turned out urs was below average...since u said u freestyled it i guess that makes sense.. but either way.. i'm not trying to put u down lol i'm just trying to make u realize u need improvement and all that.. feedback can be negative or positive.. if its positive well good for u.. if its negative the best u can do is either try n work on w/e the reader seemed to dislike n fix it.. or just move on n not worry about it... some people have different taste n style lyrically
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Prophet
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Post by Prophet »

pZy1 wrote:Wit all the negative ass shit u guys have 2 say...makes people not wanna post shit...even if u don't like the ryhmee u don't gota try an play me


If got 2 the point u guys r hatin soo much...I go 2 vote on a battle an juss cause I didn't put
Flow
Multies
Punchlines
Personal

U can't except my vote...I said seq ripped him...that's a vote obviously I feel the other kid sucked in every catagory..that shits fair?...lol even if I abuse someone I KNOW I won't get a vote...that's juss how use roll...
See I didn't wanna accept your vote cuz you might not know what Flow, Multies, or Punches are. But I accepted your vote anyway so quit bitching. And stop acting like your as good as you think you are. Your not Big P bad, but you act like your something special, but your not homie. Cee4 killed you without even trying, Kurse and Gutta merked you, and yet you had the nerve to say I couldn't rap, and I'm still waiting for you to tell me how many bars you wanna go. Anyways, when I was first came here, I was only rapping for a month, and I knew I wasn't that good so I didn't act like I was the greatest MC that came to Illest.

And unlike you I took negative feedback as constructive criticism, its because of the people that gave me negative feed that I improved. You see, people like B-bear, Sequence, Ekoms, etc...would be happy to help u improve. But you don't want to take the advice Ekoms gave you, then B-bear gave you advice, you didn't wanna take his advice either. If your not gonna take anyone's advice, then how do you expect to improve!?

And if your mad cuz you got negative feedback, then just leave this site.

Oh and my names not "the other kid", ask your mom about me bitch, she knows my name.
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pZy1
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Post by pZy1 »

Is this kid serious?.....
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MesaR
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Post by MesaR »

dont worry dude, let it die

stay up.
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