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What Do You Do

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when ur best isnt good enough what do u do?
and when ur smile turns 2 a frown and sky isnt blue?
when ur tears arent clear their filled with blood
and when ur hands and shoes are stained from layin in the mud
and when u got no one but ur self 2 think about,
what do u do when ur mouth opens but wont shout?
what happens when u needa breath of fresh air
to awake you from this misery and dispair?
what happens when ur eyes see the diseption
of what u thought wud always be perfection?
and what happens when u surrounded by ppl
but still feel so lonely and see the evil
and what happens when u kno ur soul is gone
do u write another verse or make another song?
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

so wat happens?.. lol it was alright.. alot of repetition in this but enjoyed the questions u had asking
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

cudnt tell u man loll..justa lil poem i thought id drop..but thanks 4 leavin some feed
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Post by Spoof »

EkomS wrote:it was alright.. alot of repetition in this but enjoyed the questions u had asking
^^^word, I think the question is so good that you could've write quite long poem about it. The short one is aight too though
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