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... R.Fiasco Presents: Subliminal Criminal ..

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intro:
.. Niggas is So Lame, i Can`t Explain it ..
Rell is So Lameless, ain`t Gon` Say ya Name Kid ..
i ain`t Tryna Make U Famous ..
So Go ahead & Say That "Oohh That Lame is afraid Shit" ..
& i`ll Juss Load Up Mah Text & Spray Tha Stainless ..

Uhh ..
it`s So Wack Here, Mah Fam Said it`ll Come around Cousin ..//..
Too Complex Wit Mah Wordplay, i ain`t Dumbin` Down Nothin` ..//..
Gotta Lil` Spark, But y`all "Hot Jokes" Like "Summer Clown Buzzes" ..//..
i`m Not Playin` Wit U Niggas Should Go Back to Makin` Sigs ..//..
Blowdryin` is Not included When i`m Hot & Sprayin` Wigs ..//..
Lmao Niggas is Like 30 Sumptin` Still Tryna Fuckin` Make it Big ..//..
They Talk about Mah Shoes, Mad `cus i`m Stayin` Draped ..//..
Fakes, Quick to "Change in Tha Booth" Like "Superman" i`ll Spray ya Cape ..//..
i Heard it Through Tha Vine, as if These Dudes Was Playin` Grapes ..//..
Hated On By Fake animals, i`m Like a "Showerin` Monkey" How i`ma "Bathing Ape" ..//..
i Don`t Stay For Days, i Juss Crash For Years ..//..
Havin` ya Heartbeatin`, Givin` Dudes Massive Fear ..//..
ta Caskets Near, So i`m "Surroundin` Tha World" How i Put `em "at Most Fear" ..//..
Bunch Of Lames & Niggas Can Tell He`s a Phoney & a Bitch ..//..
Skinny Niggas Run This Shit, Dudes Mad `cus He Hella Boney & He Sick ..//..
Dickriders, This Site Pack More "Stans" Than "Ceremonies & Events" ..//..
Shells Uh Blow Heat When He Spit, i ain`t Worried They Gay Bitches Hatin` ..//..
i May Spray Clips Of achin` ......
Bitch Boys, ya Sister`ll Shine Before U Do Like a "Ray J Situation" ..//..
Made it Flood awhile ago, U Dudes Doin` Different Weathers ..//..
Niggas Think They ill Wit Multies, But They Got "Forced Words" Like "Defensive Letters" ..//..
Fat Dudes Think They Fly, But Couldn`t even Do Eight Crunches ..//..
eatin` Niggas Daily, `cus i Stay Lunchin` ......
Dudes Spit Like "Video Game Boxin" How They Swing "Played Punches" ..//..
IL ain`t Nothin` But Drama & Snitches Like "He Told Jakes ??.." ..//..
Mad at Rell `cus He So Caked, & He So Great ..//..
That He`s "Tough to Rip" Like a "Plastic Knife to a T-Bone Steak" ..//..

Uhh .. Look ..
i Shouldn`t Be Here, i`m Behind Bars, Tha Subliminal Criminal ..//..
Rap Gods??.. i`ll Turn U into a Riddle Dude, Be-Little U ..//..
God M.C, Me R. Fi, i`ll Spit a Few, Here`s Little Proof ..//..
`cus i`m Juss Mad Sick Lames, Crazy Sneaks, Yeah Mad Kick Game ..//..
Fuck U Homos, i`m So Dolo, i`ll Fight Clubs Wit Out Tha "Brad Pitt Fame" ..//..
Tha Devotion, Emotion, i`m Exposin`, ain`t Nothin` to When i Bust Mah Fifth ..//..
& Juss Have to Leave all U "Pussies Wet" as if i Was to "Touch Mah Chick" ..//..
Fuck! i`m Sick ........
to all U Niggas That Got a Problem Wit Rell .........
Get On ya Knees Bitch & Suck Mah Dick ..//..

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Bunch Of Lames & Niggas Can Tell He`s a Phoney & a Bitch ..//..
Skinny Niggas Run This Shit, Dudes Mad `cus He Hella Boney & He Sick ..//..
Dickriders, This Site Pack More "Stans" Than "Ceremonies & Events" ..//..

LOL..^^shit wuz funny but true..

Bitch Boys, ya Sister`ll Shine Before U Do Like a "Ray J Situation" ..//.

believe u talkin bout brandy there^but that was clever..


IL ain`t Nothin` But Drama & Snitches Like "He Told Jakes ??.." ..//..
Mad at Rell `cus He So Caked, & He So Great ..//..
That He`s "Tough to Rip" Like a "Plastic Knife to a T-Bone Steak" ..//..

LOL^^^

the last like 2 bars were sick as well..nice drop rell..seems since u back u droppin shit and showin urself again..good shit id give this a 9.0..flow didnt really fall off ever 2 me,and the bars i mentioned above were nice i thought..good shit tho man,liked it...-uNo-
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Lmao .. GoodLookin` Out Tram & JJ ..
Uppin` On This ..
Let These Muthafuckas See ..
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Diz Wuz Nice.. But Niggahz On Here Ayn Even Worth it ya Digg
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Post by complexity »

-.HaZarD.- wrote:Diz Wuz Nice.. But Niggahz On Here Ayn Even Worth it ya Digg
True. You're way doper than everybody on this site man.

btw, "Lmao Niggas is Like 30 Sumptin` Still Tryna Fuckin` Make it Big ..//..
They Talk about Mah Shoes, Mad `cus i`m Stayin` Draped ..//..
Fakes, Quick to "Change in Tha Booth" Like "Superman" i`ll Spray ya Cape ..//..
i Heard it Through Tha Vine, as if These Dudes Was Playin` Grapes ..//"

Sick wordplay.
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GoodLookin` Out ..
Uppin` For These Faggot ass Niggas ..
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Man Dis Niggah iz a Leech
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My Favourite Lines Were Probably The Ones Complexity Quoted. Pretty Solid Piece And There's Aggression in There Which Was Missing From ur Previous Pieces. Dope Wordplay And Multis, Keep Droppin.
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Son i Don`t Gotta Be agressive ..
Tha`s Juss Wat U Prefer ..
i ain`t Tryna Have a agressive Style Like Yours ..
So .. ain`t Nothin` Missin` ..
U Juss ain`t Open-Minded about Other Styles ..

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-.RELL.FiaSCO.- wrote:Son i Don`t Gotta Be agressive ..
Tha`s Juss Wat U Prefer ..
i ain`t Tryna Have a agressive Style Like Yours ..
So .. ain`t Nothin` Missin` ..
U Juss ain`t Open-Minded about Other Styles ..

Oh & Thanks ..
i Never Said u Had To Be, Yeah i Prefer it And u Showed u Can Be Complex With Styles in This. i Think ive Said a Few Times That 'i Just Don't Like Laid Back Styles' But Yeah Take it How u Wnna. Trust u To Bitch More Lol.
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^^.. if U Don`t Like Laid Back Styles Don`t Read Mah Shit ..
Tha Only Reason U Drop ya Little Lines ..
is `cus U Had a Verse to Drop anyways ..
So One yaself Kid ..
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-.RELL.FiaSCO.- wrote:Tha Only Reason U Drop ya Little Lines ..
is `cus U Had a Verse to Drop anyways ..
i Don't Quite Get What u Said There But it's Probably Bullshit, What u Say Usually is. And Guy, id Crush u With Lyrics Any Day So Doooon't Even Go There Lol.
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LMFAO ..
Dawg ..
Set Up a Topical Battle Then Son ..

& U Know Why U Only Give FB ..
U Don`t even Read Tha Shit ..
U Juss Read Wat Other People Say ..
add On Tha "U Needa Be agressive" ..
& Tha`s it ..
all `cus U Got a Verse to Drop ..
So Don`t Go There ..
i Got it On MSN ..
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Correction, i Said i Hate Leaving Feedback, And Usually Just Do it When im Gnna Drop a Verse. Lol i Got Nothing To Hide. And Enough Of That Topical Bullshit, if u Wnna Battle, Then Battle.
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U Said U Would Crush Me Wit Lyrics ..
.... So a Topical Battle ..
is Still a Battle .. Lol ..
U Scared ??..
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