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All links since last drop. All should be fairly descriptive.
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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/you-l ... t6293.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/un-ti ... t6294.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/a-hol ... t6286.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/stuck ... t6314.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/quick ... t6265.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/one-p ... t6264.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/illes ... t6268.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/cycle ... t6242.html
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Second verse is coming soon.
Poor new-old style, is gone, sorry. Complexness.

Now a days being emcee, well it pays to be
this is phaze two, Im coming to amaze you
blaze through the letters A TO Z
I aint Jesus, how did I raise emcees?
I spit in the pm and even at AM-E
spraying debris, while I'm slaying the keys
and basically anyone whose aiming at me

I still hold the throne, emcees act like they are old n grown
shut the fuck up, until your sold and known
why do you gotta front like ocean homes
only thing you get cracking is broken bones
I'm smoking foes, with my most focused flows
a mixture of coke n dro - overload
flows so serious, this time I wont say that Im joking though

so what the fuck are you suppose to know
I just let the emotion flow, dont tell me how my game is
you couldn't give away a ticket at an open show
yet alone grab the stainless this fag is brainless
so brag your famous, but I hope you know
your platue is far away, mine is a bar away
I'm a star today, ur days are numbered like penny hardaway

it's hard to say whose the best, or who you should test
figuratively speaking...microphones I could bless
if I had the time, a brand new pen n pad to rhyme
we all have a sign, we should follow that dotted line
all I got is mine, an optic shine, the objects mine
Im the god of spits, hip-hops been lost since nautilus
Im bringing it back to all its conscieness

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these emcees act like they got swagger n shit
but couldn't have sharp flow, if they put a dagger in it
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Post by B-Bear »

I loved the start to it..

And pretty much liked the rest as well, a lot of good multies.. in that way i don't mean like rhymin advanced words, but the clever lil ones that makes sense, u're gettin better with that..

"I still hold the throne, emcees act like they are old n grown
shut the fuck up, until your sold and known"

I thought the topic was creative, gotta say i liked it

Anyhow, a good drop in my opinion - good to see your back at droppin some writtens.. Keep it up!
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

why do you gotta front like ocean homes
only thing you get cracking is broken bones

loved that bar^..but this whole thing was hot..i didnt seen this comin 2 be honest..its nice tho
glad 2 see ur writin again as the person above me said..keep it comin man this was serious shit..real eye opener id [email protected]
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

nice flow, multis, topic, and use of creativity..overall i think its one of ur better pieces..second verse's got a nice pun to start it as well
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spraying debris, while I'm slaying the keys
and basically anyone whose aiming at me

Im the god of spits, hip-hops been lost since nautilus
Im bringing it back to all its conscieness

^^ pretty sick homie

dont think the whole thing was was your best but some hot pieces in there
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

why do you gotta front like ocean homes
only thing you get cracking is broken bones
I'm smoking foes, with my most focused flows
a mixture of coke n dro - overload
flows so serious, this time I wont say that Im joking though

^^ .. Tha Punch Was Deadly ..
Flowin` Was Hella Breeze Through Like ..
Smooth & Calm ..

so what the fuck are you suppose to know
I just let the emotion flow, dont tell me how my game is
you couldn't give away a ticket at an open show
yet alone grab the stainless this fag is brainless
so brag your famous, but I hope you know
your platue is far away, mine is a bar away


^^ .. Multies Was Cold ..
i Love How U Went Back & Forth Wit Multies Between Multies ..
U Do That Tha Best ..
Hella Sick Though ..
One Of ya Better Drops ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by complexity »

Wow. If this is one of my best. I really need to retire.
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