Finding Flaws

[-TraMaTiK-]

ok idk if this has been done or not..buttttttt...what we wud do is find a rappers verse,read it over & insteada lookin 4 whats good,see whats bad in it...then repost what u think is bad and then post a different verse from another rapper..and i kno not every damn rapper who's on the radio or has been is flawless..or non commercial artists either...so ill start it off..someone try finding something u believe is bad in this verse...

this is a Verse from Rakim's song 'flow forever'

Ha, what's goin on? Yo c'mon, you know it's on
I wrote a song, test my flow on the Autobahn
Make sure the force is right, I floss all night
Get off the mic it'll smoke like an exhaust pipe
Keep em in the lie-bury, studyin my theory
Ra theory get translated in Swahili
From the lands as far as Zanzibar
they understand the R, the man Allah
It's obvious why the copiers, they copy this
soon as my data processes Y2K they floppy disk
Now who the hottest is? How can it not be this?
Baby who the cockiest? Papi is? Gracias
Aiyyo, this be so, magnifico
Even my, typical, style difficult
Make a crowd go wild when I rip a show
Better stand back, this'll blow, you didn't know?

[Momeijah]

This is a Good idea, But Shouldn't This Be in Hip Hop Discussion?

[-TraMaTiK-]

yea prolly shud..one of the admins plz move this 2 hip hop discussion

[Gutta]

shit there aint too many flaws in that verse... rakim can ride a beat better than any MC so even if his shit is simple it still seems pretty flawless to me.