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drunken jesus
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Post by drunken jesus »

first dude was good, the 2 dudes after him had alotta trouble staying on beat

1st dude - no complaints, 2nd & 3rd need alotta delivery and flow work, get some rhythm, swagger, presence, & confidence and ya'll should be straight
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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16 Micz
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Post by 16 Micz »

i agree wit DJ, overall a nice track u got hear, if the last two work on their delivery and flow, the first one was nice tho, beat was good lyrics were good, quality was eh, charisma was ok, but anywho keep it up
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Post by Mephisto »

That beats pretty slick, sounds nice and the 1st guy had a nice flow on for it, other 2 guy were alright. Solid track overall. Just keep at it.
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Post by LadySam »

yea the first guy was good, i like the beat also, i dunno if its from another song or whatever, the second guy was ok i think he was iffy at the beginning but alright towards the end, i liked yours tho, not bad mate, good work.
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Post by HKX »

track is aight but da last 2 need 2 up it a notch shits decent tho lol
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