Though I...

[Young K]

Feed Would Be Aprecciated...

[B-Bear]

Major improvement.. but still some awkward tones in your performance tho.. but since it's your own recordin i'ma skip that..

U still struggle to keep up with the beat.. but iI find it kinda hard myself to spit to such a slow beat.. i miss some attitude.. u gotta show u really want the words to reach out like they gon come thorugh the speakers and really conquer the listener..

U gotta buy a better mic tho.. but I'm feelin u on this one man.. i see major improvement.. keep it up!

[Young K]

thanks for the feed

[drunken jesus]

beat was good, your really slow flow is monotonous you need more charisma your tones wayy too laid back, just because a beat is slow doesn't mean you have to rap slow on it, most people rap faster over slow beats to compensate, the hook is the high point, you have more charisma on it but it could be done a lil better, the though though part at the end is awkward sounding

[Street Pharmacist]

good shit my nigga u started it off hot,the flow is hard,and the lyrics were on point solid drop my nigga had alot of emotion too it.

[Young K]

thanks