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Changing Tides

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A New Track Called "Changing Tides" It's Part 1 And A 2 part Series, So DownLoad, Listen And Let Me Know What You Think.

Thanks Alot, Peace.

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1st Of All The Quality Of This Was a Lot Better Than Some Of ur Previous Tracks it Was More Polished And Professional. Beat Was Coo, u Rode it Nice. Lyrics Were Aright, it Was a Good Song But Like The 3rd Or 4th ive Heard From u Talkin About Girls/Ex Girl, i Mean The Song Was Good But i Wouldn't Get Carried Away With The Topic, So Be Diverse Dude! Lol. With That Said ur Getting Better With Delivery And Emotion And i Liked What i Heard, What Threw Me Off Was ive Heard u Rap About This Shit a Couple Of Times Lol, Other Than That Keep it Up.
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Post by SlickMex »

I for one like the songs you do..IMO they don't get old but i guess Domino has a point about maybe changing the subject..But as far as this song goes did sound better quality wise and i liked the feeling and lyrics that go into your songs..
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i like it ill leave more feed later when i have a chance to
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This Isn't A Song About My Ex, This Is A Song About Being Controlled By People, And It Just Happened To Be My Ex And A Few Other People That Have Done It. So Although I Mention Her In It, Doesn't Make The Song About Her. And I Can Tell You Right Now, Alot Of My Future Songs Will be About Different Aspects Of Relationships I've Had.. So I i'm not just writing abotu my ex lol, And If I Feel Like Writing a Thousand Songs About My Ex, I Wil Do It if THats What i feel like writing about .. but thanks for the feed so far you guys totally apreciate it.
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Domino wrote:Girls/Ex Girl
i Meant in General u Asshat Lol.
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W.e Man LoL It Doesn't Matter i Do What I Want !! So If I Want To Record SOngs Abotu girls the rest of my life i will !!! lol
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Diverse wrote:W.e Man LoL It Doesn't Matter i Do What I Want !! So If I Want To Record SOngs Abotu girls the rest of my life i will !!! lol
What About Men?
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Post by Lawgix »

hey man i give props on anybody that can write a track about an actual event cause if u actually know a person thats either controlling, a snitch, a whore, a douchebag ect. u can write anything

i liked this track... loved the beat... it was some ill shit... so yeah
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This is a really good piece.Its the only one ive heard from you but its really good and i like the intro in it it seems so professional keep it up man.keep it up

9/10

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sum1 put unprofessional so i had to change it bac
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Post by LadySam »

^^ it seems so unprofessional? is that a good thing? lol
i like that diverse writes songs like this. theyre always cool
i loved this. the intro was great. but i had to dl it like 4 times to
get the whole thing properly which was GAY! haha =)
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T.K.6 wrote:but its really good and i liek the intro in it it seems so unprofessional 9/10
u should be smacked hard after u said that...
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WTF i didnt write that i put professional sum1 was fuckin wit it
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Lawgix wrote:
T.K.6 wrote:but its really good and i liek the intro in it it seems so unprofessional 9/10
u should be smacked hard after u said that...
Lawgix...Just...One...More...Post...Till...2000.
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Post by drunken jesus »

quit making tracks about girls leaving you for robodon you emo sissy
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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