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Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

iight biatch u happy now,i got my mind made up//
alot of people are sayin my girl deserves better//
but i feel it aint right to walk outta her life & upset her//
but b4 i leave you to it//
i want you to read and understand my letter//
to tell you the truth i still love you//
and those bitches you call ur "freinds" set us up//
errbody iz jelous and dun want us together//
fuck the world girl and let them be//
you dont need them baby you got me//
permanantly//
keep ya head up and stay by my side//
Just make Sur None of those Problems collide//
you know when im not with ya it hurt inside//
Lets go far away lay back and sip on a beer//
I promise ya dear i'll always Be here//
Just for my sake baby//
Just make sure no one tries to interfere//
And when they say shit bout me//
Dont let those rumours and Lies Get to ur ear//
Trust me girl//
We can do whatever u wanna do//
coz all my life i prayed for somebody like you//....

Oh yeh i wrote this up
coz like as ya'll shud know
the world is full of bitches who like to fuck thingz up
and some of these cats are fucking up alota shit for me
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Post by MesaR »

ok
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

LMAO AT UR D.P
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Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

I was thinkin of puttin it 2 audio
but i dunno
lyk i cant find any Beats that might be okay for it
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Post by Cee4 »

This is a big improvement. When you battled me recently your verse was basic to say the least. This is a 100% improvement. Keep it up
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Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

Thanx man
i was reading my old rymes they were
pretty elementary!!
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Post by 134282 »

What's with the first line...? "Aight, bitch, you happy now, I got my mind made up..." What's that about...?
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Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

Its mainly refering yo my girls freinds
if you know what i mean
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