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Don't Care Sample for 16 micz beat

Post by Dead Silence »

this is a sample of my verse for 16 micz beat i may change it but its pretty much this shit leave feed please
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

dude honestly not tryin to be mean, but do you think you sound good>??? by any means...?

cuz honestly you need to stop pausin like that, and try to speak a lil clearer... and yes only michael jackson can change colors. I mean its like tough be nice listenin to this.
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Post by Dead Silence »

well dude its a shitty mic and shit like dat and 16 mics like it so yeah i mean is it the best one uve heard from me so far?
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Post by Dead Silence »

i really cant believe that my voice isnt distorted coz this is my shitty desktop mic that picks up every little sound lol but yeah i get wt u sayin ill do that when i make the full version of it this is just a sample im redoin the verse and shit
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Post by Dead Silence »

comon ppl leave feed back
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Post by RH1NO »

umm i listened for about 30 seconds....

and its 30 seconds of my life that i will

NEVER GET BACK

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Post by MesaR »

dude having a shitty mic has no bearings on what you acutally write, and how you sing that onto a track.

Dude you gotta learn the basics, you just dont wake up one day and go make a song when you cant write decent lyrics to start out with you kno what i mean?.

and if you complain about having a shit mic. its not hard to get a better one.

making a big deal outta it all, my mic is shit quailty sucks. well save up and get new one.


About The Track.

i thought the first bar was decent.
Vocals Sound Shit, Becuz The Beat Is Louder Then u Are.
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Post by Lawgix »

a micz beat ruined... i feel like an indian watchin the white man litter on their land... *tear*<<< my cries are only from laughter...

get at me on msn... we'll have a talk as well
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Post by Dead Silence »

ight thanks for the feed

ight lawgix i will
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best producer/mc duo since gangstarr
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Dead Silence »

killin me DJ lol
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