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Momeijah
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Post by Momeijah »

134282 wrote:No go fucking get that shit.
as Much as i Agree With What u Said, u Also Mentioned Once That if i Caught u Typo'ing i Should Shove Some Pwnage Down ur Throat. TYPO'IN ASS MOTHERFUCKER. :)
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134282
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Post by 134282 »

Domino wrote:
134282 wrote:No go fucking get that shit.
as Much as i Agree With What u Said, u Also Mentioned Once That if i Caught u Typo'ing i Should Shove Some Pwnage Down ur Throat. TYPO'IN ASS MOTHERFUCKER. :)
Sick. Sick!

Nice catch... ;)
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~Symbolikull~
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i totally agree wit you on what you said, and thanx for the feed..
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Young K »

i like this
the lyrics were great
and the audio was better
nice flow and what not
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thanx man appreciate the feed
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

LoL i like this shit... dope.. old but yeah..ya sounded uncomfortable and hesitant.. still good
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Post by Viral »

mad props..i enjoyed both altho im almost 100% positive ive heard the second one before..lol...i will say that u need to work on ur breathing..it kinda threw u slightly off beat a bit i noticed..and i wasnt gettin much emotion from it really..it was ALMOST like u were reading..but NOT reading exactly..i cant exactly explain..but im sure u know wat i mean..otherwise the lyrics r fire as usual..and the flow is tight...so other than the breath/emotion issue...shit was raw...lol
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