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Dead Silence
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My Flow On Point Like LeBron in Game Six
Every Time i Lift Tha Fifth You Kno My Aim Hits

didnt u use that in our battle?
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right right i no wat u mean well get that shit together i gots to hear it
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the flow was good, but the punches could be better.. few nice ones few bad ones just gotta fix it up some more n rearrange bars and lines
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