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Momeijah
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Post by Momeijah »

Pretty Nice Man. The Flow Never Fell Off And u Kept The Multis Comin. Some Nice Punches in There And Wordplays Like The Dipset Line But i Could See it Was a Quick Drop And Not ur Best, Keep Droppin.
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Post by RH1NO »

haha you been doin alotta sports drops ..its dope though

flow was nice

multis were on point

got a little basic in the middle but yeah stepped up wit the dipset line

nice drop like 6 or 7/10
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

ur elevatin alot i see JJ good shit tho...this bar kinda stood out 4 me which i think domino referenced 2 as well

might as well be an NBA ref tha way i pitch techs
jus call me Cam or Juelz tha way i dip sets


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Post by Dead Silence »

i like tha style u use and he metaphors in it
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Post by SlickMex »

That was a nice verse liked how you used Athletes
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Word Man I see some elevation in here Stay Up Man This Verse Was Pretty Good..
But Some Lines Seemed. Abit Forced Or Maybe I Just Dont Get Them
go head you kidz can cheat on tha nina cuz i'm packin tha heataz
my triggaz is A-Rod and tha plastic is Jeeta
Oooh well The Rest was pretty solid, hope to see more from you,
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Post by MesaR »

Word Man I see some elevation in here Stay Up Man This Verse Was Pretty Good..
But Some Lines Seemed. Abit Forced Or Maybe I Just Dont Get Them
go head you kidz can cheat on tha nina cuz i'm packin tha heataz
my triggaz is A-Rod and tha plastic is Jeeta
Oooh well The Rest was pretty solid, hope to see more from you,
PEace

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it's sick but i'm gonna straight murda some doodz
callin tha police dont help when no ones eva heard of yo.. lol
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

besides all the gun talk, it was pretty decent some nice similies and metas in there, multies were aight for the most part, some pretty dope lines sparadically placed.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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