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The Love Of A Girl

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guys we all know what we want in a girl... but this is what i think about it. check it out!

the love of a girl means alot to this soldiers heart
so to play it smart, I'll play the parts, and be an add-on to your heart
the love of a girl means ever lastin
so we can cast the past out like a stone, on the sand where were standin
the love of a girl is to come home to a wife whos never cheated
i don't care about sex, i just want to feel like our lives are completed
i'm not like most men that just fuck and run
i'm the other side of a man who will give u flowers and call u hun
the love of a girl is my everything to me
thats why i'd work so hard to give her everything that she'd ever need
the love of a girl is a true emotion
and not let our feelins go up and down between each other like a roller coaster
the love of a girl, is to call her my chick
feel proud to take her out to dinner and maybe catch the ocassional flick
never be embarrased about the way she looks
maybe stay home for dinner, cause Lord knows i can't cook
the love of a girl, is take care of our children
and let them know daddies home when i enter the buildin haha
the love of a girl has got to be stearn
cause thats the only way to yearn, and learn about how both of our passions burn
the love of a girl, is to accepted by the family
and make that promise to them that i won't mess up like the last men did badly
the love of a girl is earn her trust
u can't rush, that gentle touch until the moment is in both of us
the love of a girl is to be down for whatever makes each of us proud
and to never get in the way of each others enjoyment, for that we'll be sittin on the clouds
the love of a girl is to clown about
and have fun with friends, but also let our true feelings for each other out
cause most men want nothing to with women
then after the entertainment and companies gone, they want the girl to forgive em
the love of a girl is to separate once in a while
and go out and have fun with friends in different directions to bring out each others style
but yet have that trust, knowin she won't go to some other guy and cheat
u want to make each other feel complete, but u can't do that runnin around on the street
the love of a girl, is to feel the warmth
just let her love swarm around u and let her girlish ways empower u yeah just let her flaunt
the love of a girl is to let her know ur there
and if shes ever scared u'll save the day, be her superman none compared
thats what i want, in a relationship
and i understand that i've been knee deep in some stupid shit
but this is comin from the mans perspective and heart
and if ur all these things, u have my love my mind my body and my thoughts!
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uppin...
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself

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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

excellent job man...i liked this bar alot..

the love of a girl has got to be stearn
cause thats the only way to yearn, and learn about how both of our passions burn

true^..everything u said wuz true i juz really liked that bar...anyways nice shit man..good drop id give it @least 8/10..nice work!...PeaCe


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thanx uppin...
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Post by Young K »

This is a good piece...
Some bars stood out...
The repitition was good...
This was good 8/10...
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Post by Dead Silence »

i like this alot 9/10
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Nice stuff.
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thanx fam
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