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Rhymes From The Notebook ft. DOMINO

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Hieroglyphics seemed ridiculous when compared
to these scriptures, the walls spoke of great despair
my decrepit sketches etched with sharp edges
when seen in perspective it was seemingly epic
thats why phenomenal minds immediately left it
I was a rhyming god, respected until my final exit
playing black jack in Texas, showing my best shit
see I defined the odds, and the way I expressed it
me and Edgar Allen Poe, were both excellent
spent our lives wrestling with our own intelligence
even all of Romes, greatness failed in measurement
stones ancient with the text an amazing regiment
still not obsolete in the modern days of development
my styles repetitive, its a case of embellishment
parades praised what I wrote for days than years
even the moon couldn't block the shades of tears
in the days of grenades n spears, I swung iron fists
took matters into my own hands, like scientists
defiant writtens, inscribed with ambition which is
derived from Latin, it means drive or a goal of passion
described as alone, cuz writing is a lonely addiction
suicide crossed my mind, but it was only a vision
the audience listened, cuz I connected with them
in retrospect the best, yes, I guess I am than
now theres only allegories, and the truth is missing
if you want to rise someones spirit, try a crucifixion
short stories with fiction, were basically non-existent
I had enough accuracy, that I was constantly consistent
logically we think different, when looking at hypocrisy
hence knowledge and religion not both in my philosophy
I have god in me, but religion is still the death of knowledge
even dead, I still don't accept anything less than flawless

Domino

u Can't Reach Me With Any-Prayer, But i Reside Everywhere
im Watching Everyone Close in My Lair With a Deadly-Stare
Plotting ur Moves, Wondering How i Can Use Them Against-u
a Master Of Disguise, a CPU, Where All ur Data is Sent-Too
u Can't Find Me, Always Lurking in The Shadows Of an Absent-Mind
im Every Dark Thought That Sits Silent in Every Average-Guy
i Practice-Rhymes, While Outside ur Acting Like The Cliche Of a Pantomime
im Reality, u Must Find Me Before i Wash Away The Sands-Of-Time
im Like Cyberdyne, i Know All Of ur Moves Before u Make-Them
And if i See Any Unworthy Of Life u Bet i'll Slay-Em
Fuck The God Talk, im Not Leaving-Clues On The Evening-News
Seeing My Face On Burnt Toast, That's What Seperates Me-And-u (Directed at Complexity's Verse)
ur Nothing But a Placebo, Losers All Thinking They're Seeing-Signs
To Make Them Feel Better About Themselves Like it's The Key-To-Life
Cuz They Can't Do Shit About The Mess They're in, So They Call Upon u
And Fail To Grasp Me, Now That's a Quitter's-Way, They Fail And Live-in-Shame
i Can't Be Avoided Or Killed, But Some Choose To Fight Against-Me
i Do Nothing But Continue My Work, im Never Friendly Or an Enemy
Some Rap About Me, Some Doubt My Presence, Some Are Oblivious
Some Depend On What i Bring, Some Never Take Me Serious
But im Always There, i Never Stop, No Matter The Consequences
i Feel No Remorse, ill Never Change My Mind And Stop-Offenses
ill Stay Gunnin, i Gift u With Luck, To Keep ur Mind-in-The-Blue
Some Fall For My Charms, The Rest u Only Can Find-it-in-u
i Never Sleep, i Never Take a Shot-For-The-Team
i Never Stand Out, im Just Another Prop-On-The-Scene
But im The Key, u Get a 'Grip' Of Me And ur On The Right-Path
u Take Me For Granted, No Tellin How imma Strike-Back
i Dawn Like The Sun, at Anytime, And u See The Big-Picture
And im Set For Another Life, And You'll See in This-Scripture
i Make The Bells Toll, But in a Single Mind ill Never-Last
And You'll Know im Only a Dream, But The Realest One u Ever-Had
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Post by *.HarleQuin.* »

i Never Sleep, i Never Take a Shot-For-The-Team
i Never Stand Out, im Just Another Prop-On-The-Scene <<well isnt that true muahaha
anyway umm both of ur verses were really good, i liked plexie's alot
domino you seemed like u had some mixed emotions there
umm first ur like im "the shit, im the best"..then ur "im average
i blend in..blah blah"..skitzo!! no its cool i liked it

if you want to rise someones spirit, try a crucifixion <<i especially liked this line
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

i liked plex's verse alot..but both u stayed on topic and sam pointed out the bar i liked with plex..domino alotta quoteables lets just say ur whole thing was real nice...good collab either way..props 2 u both...PeaCe

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u Can't Reach Me With Any-Prayer, But i Reside Everywhere
im Watching Everyone Close in My Lair With a Deadly-Stare

i thought that was tha best bar in tha whole song well maybe not the best but iliked it alot
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