Just Something I Wrote.

[Momeijah]

whats a filler? anyway you can make it so its better? please.

ill Have ur Face Looking Like a Plum, Hung Upside Down-in-a-Tree
in My 'Hood' im The Resident Rapper, a Local That Clowns-On-Emcees
i Stay High But Still Holdin it Down, if ur Smart Then Don't Test-Me
Can't Recognise ur Face Or ur Voice, Cuz Man u Just Like The Rest-B

Notice My Lines Seemed Less Empty Than Yours? They're Still Fillers To a Certain Extent Because i Was Just Retouching ur Crappy Lines To Make Them Better. Lol So Basically Avoid Saying Shit Like 'im High Like a Bee, ill Kill u if u Test Me' Or W/e Cuz it's Boring, Pointless, Untrue And it Doesnt Catch Attention When u Listen. u Probably Read My Version Of it Thinkin 'Oooh i See What u Did There' Or 'That Was Quite Clever' So Try And Make ur Lines More Witty And Have More Content So Ppl Can Say The Same About ur Lines. And Btw, i Was at The Same Level as u Just 18 Months Ago But i Actually Tried, u Have To Actually Attempt improvisation To Get Somewhere, if ur Willing To Do That, Then There's Hope For u Yet.

[BigP]

thanks man, i understand its just where i can see my mistakes when i write shit down and have someone correct it for me, so i see what i have done wrong, ya understand me?