Thiiis Giirl, Damn!..

[MesaR]

This Girl Got Me Trapped In A Box, But I Dont Wanna Leave, ..
Her Head Rests On My Shoulder And Tha Tears On My Sleeve ..
I Quickly Brang This Girl Into My Arms, And Onto My Lips..
Moved Closer And Stared Kissin With My Hands On Her Hips..
Love Isnt Blind.. Because I See And Feel It Every Single Day..
I Got Fellings Of Her In My Arms, And Memories Of Her Walken Away..
Tha Way She Moves, Is Like A Dove, Flying High In Tha Sky...
Im Runnin Out Of Choices Do I Keep It Alive, Or Just Let It Die..
I Hope This Would All I Work, If She Knew Tha Way I Feel..
But Maybe This Girl From My " Dreams " Isnt For " Real " ..

[MesaR]

Wooops..

put this in the wrong, place can someone put it in poem area thx.

[LadySam]

this was ok not great but ok. i liked the first bar best.

Tha Way She Moves, Is Like A Dove, Flying High In Tha Sky...

this line i wasnt really feeling much.

the last line was alright
but keep dropping mate cya!

[Dead Silence]

eh shit was alright keep working at it fam

[MesaR]

i posted this about 4 months ago.

[Dead Silence]

08 Jun 2007 08:21 am thats when it was posted lol