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havent been here in a while so i feel like droppin something

tearin emcees limb from limb/ sellin the parts to war amps to pin to gimps/ simply cause it takes a sin to win/ pound back liquor till i spin again/ kick ribs till kids begin to cringe/ tracing fate shifts of raging hatred has me exchanging places and stating phases of what the reining craze is/ creating cases and arranging strange lists containing hate spits straining the basics/
raining flame skids from the sky containing base hits, songs in the form of dick chaineys insane blitze/
while refraining from the need to break lips/ putting ink to paper untill the restraining page rips/ then lyrical mayhem is set lose like the lock on the sustaining cage slips/ seeping in through listeners ears developing there insanity have em thinkin of entertaining strange shit/ like takin 8 sips, of pure adrenaline makin ancient, heiroglyphics the replacement, of the modern alphabet chanting ohms in the basement/ things morphing, lookin in the mirror seein some demonic facelift/


uhhh, edited this to try get rid of the emotes, for some reason there were like 500 emotes all over the place, lol TOM WHAT DID YOU DO
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The rhyme scheme on this was dope. And some cool content for a freestyle, mess around. Nice job
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