conatgious

[Viral]

north koreas got my infection in their nuke testin section got a piece of me before i woke up during the disection my midsections bleedin more den ebola at its final stage, hopped off da bed n ripped the scalpel raw, snapped a jaw grabbed a case of syringes n stabbed em all, had a shot of morpheine to keep da gash calm i got a smashed palm from the pressured restraints its gettin blurry and i cant think, alarms blarin makin my ears bleed like a open fire hydrant, lookin to mah right n see a mutated tyrant, grab an axe n break thru da window kill da beast n steal his trench coat, get on the bench im coach, n right now im playin for the world cup, bust thru the doors to see a squad of swat i better pop a squat before dey see me n plot a dot right between my eye balls under a sink cabinet drinkin lysol, it taste like lemons and it burns my mouth from the bullet hole in my right cheek, its a tight squeeze between the counter and the air duct, shots flyin thru the aluminum and man it sucks, im fucked..stuck in a 3 foot space n no where to go, so i pop out a vent and slide thru the hole, im at the front door...with a last breath to make it....my heart stops as da dart pierces the cartiladge between my ribs...i cant carry it ne longer..fuck it..ill let the sickness infect the kids......


to be continued.....

[complexity]

Well don't let the title throw you off "contagious" is a nice freestyle. The rhymes went well together. It was a little disgusting but do your thing! Very vivid like drinking lysol it burns my cheek from the bullet hole. You can actually picture that. So this was a pretty good piece. I don't like part 2 as much though.

[precise]

i liked it man, entertainin, some nice lines too like:

"snapped a jaw grabbed a case of syringes n stabbed em all"

im gonna go check the other one ya posted