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Post by precise »

not excellent bro, but not bad at all for a beginner

its good to see you kinda got the concept of multies tho, just keep workin on it

good shit
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facin me? its mission impossible, like pickin up lesbian broads
fuck all these thespian frauds, they "bug me" like espionage
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^^^^ thanks man it was a bad verse i was just learning how to post shit on here so ya that aint my best it prolly my worst. but thanks for the feed homie
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eh is Symbolikull related to Iron Solomon?? lol
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Post by кℓαѕѕιιcк »

yo i may nott be well known but yeh
im 14 and i know for a fact well
practise makes perfect
so like i try to rap about my feelings
and when you do rap about ur feelings people can relate to it
Im not sayin that other rap is shit
its just a lil tip fo' when ya bored
ur goin good with that verse
Keep working and ur good wif ya multis aswell /peace
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