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ill aim these straps
n infrared paint these cats
i hate this blatant crap,
dance classes is whats become of mainstream rap
we need lyrical attacks but i aint seen that,
hip hop is dead.. oh no it cant be that
today whats considered a lyiricist is misconstrued,
cats back in the day would fuckin piss on papoose
like kiss or the roots,
fuck snappin fingers n two steppin
jus fuckin spit me the truth
you would never see pac n biggie,
pop lock n drop it cuz they would not get jiggy
they would just click clack n pop it,
cuz the glock is itchy n that keeps the block in business
chicken soup peanut butter jelly n fuckin baseball bats,
i cant take all that
i need a break from all that,
im about ta brakedown for fuck sake
n give mase a call back
boosie n joc,
are weak as fuck n pollutin the blocks
havin fuckin illusions of pac,
get hit quick when nas bring the uzi in spots
"im hot cuz im fly you aint cuz you not"
come on dog r u serious
wow what a lyricist,
somebody hit the fuckin playback
n show him how queer he is
n fuck this shit lip gloss?,
id rather hear another version of push it from rick ross
id pay money ta see these "beat riders" picked off,
hip hops not dead its just that the shits lost
old school vs. new
these cats would reap the whirlwind
fuck cd's let the vinyl spin til the swirl ends,
i dont want ta hear a joint on how ya speak ta ya girlfriend
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are weak is fuck n pollutin the blocks
havin fuckin illusions of pac,


i like that line man, Pac my favorite rapper of all time, period. And after reading through your verse i undastand u feel like rap now adays aint how it wuz back in the golden Ages, which is somethin i strongly feel. keep up da good work
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my favorite bar was the same thing that caught gutta's attention, although i've seen better from u.. alot better actually... multis were there.. not everywhere but that's fine .. seemed a lil mainstream style.. n i guess that's wat u were going for? n e ways i didn't like it that much but it wasn't bad
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