Freestyle Session FEATURING A LOST VET!

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Mon May 28, 2007 2:10 pm

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we keep it insane our venom eating your veins the blood clots depleting your brain
your drug off deep in the rain your guts rot and leak in terrain your face cut off
with a knife the size of a pipe, it down or your dying tonight, wanna know why i am right
cuz youre trying to fight , I am going in rewind to destroy all those who have spit rhymes
I split minds with sick lines,i just got an examination and I need a decontamination
ill go to hot97 and demand the station to listen to my emancipation of freedom
most get cancer late in life but my sick cells are to poisonous and I cant beat them
so I join them, the point is this, there is none bitch! this is a pointless spit
i dont usually smoke but the joint is lite, me and viral on the freestyle tip
after one hit the laugher kicks in then we start tripping stare into the mirror, look clearer
every one of my body parts missng,fuck typos,now Im more paranoid than Bart Simpson
similes iller, my heart is ripping out my chest, the beat is louder than the stereoset
i start getting aerial next, flying so high, my eyes are denying the sky still lyrical text
gets dropped on these weak bastards, you dont need to check these factors
me and viral wreck these rappers while getting real head from sexy actors
plexies back, virals back, with that textcee crack, and wild rap, them are some hefty facts
like Big P being questioned about his Obesity, where the fuck did i lose my decency
we got Viral seeing Harlem secretly,cheating on Chicago and im fucking her tomorrow
my time is also borrowed with ladysam, Ill be putting my dick in a really white rapper
and I aint talking a fucking condom, but DAWG her pussy is like Iraq shouldnt have gone in
still got so much brains I made the hoe dumb, my dick still harder than old gum
who the fuck is better than us no-one, slash that..not even one, no-none

GUESS WHO IS BACK BITCHES
-------------THE V MAN HIMSELF - VIRAL! -----------

Mention my name ill have u repentin in pain/
ill lessen ya game cuz deez lines stay stressin ya frame//
cut ya throat up wit venemous blades,i stay above the bar givin u a hennessy chase/
my enemies face burnin throats till their hearts explode in a menacing rage//
explain my personality,im split like a pea, seperated from my soul at birth, i bet u jst shit n then pee'd/
i take explosive pills ready to get u hit wit a tee, blood drips from ya forhead, dont test this fist ull get beat//
i file thru lines till my smile jst shines, from the atroscity of my lyrics, got nines cocked spiralin minds/
towerin shines i breathe to commit crimes, leavin spirits possesed wit demons, no signs im diein from pilein lives//
i stay on topic, speciffically nothin at all, im jst fuckin wit ya'll, i really base it around murder drugs muffins n bras/so let me flip it n stick ya wit toxic liquids n rock the earth till the axis rivets shatterin da core exposin stuffin n all//
so cut the bullshit, i rather slit my wrists n empty a full clip into my chest before i get fooled bitch/
find the tools snitch, or get pulled into a vat of acid, n smashed wit a massive hammer now i got a pulled wrist!//
ive gone cold again, my hearts frozen as ice, kryptonite cancer got me stumblin, reachin for knifes/
numb bones my friend, darts pierce a thin slice, slit the right answer,it equals blood drippin for nights//
take a minute n reflect on my acts, i dont respect others so attack...maybe my characters class/
fuck you by the way ill be tearin ya facts, till ur stamped on the forehead, declarin i never cared in the past//

16 Micz · Post by **16 Micz** » Mon May 28, 2007 4:29 pm

dammmnnn, pretty good, pretty much what i expected, plex came pretty good on this piece, some funny lines, multis, rhyme scheme, everything was good

viral had some nice rhyming, multis, and what not...it got off track for like 1 line but definitely good....both of you fags keep it up

Fav Lines

Plex:ill go to hot97 and demand the station to listen to my emancipation of freedom
most get cancer late in life but my sick cells are to poisonous and I cant beat them
so I join them, the point is this, there is none bitch! this is a pointless spit
i dont usually smoke but the joint is lite, me and viral on the freestyle tip

and I aint talking a fucking condom, but DAWG her pussy is like Iraq shouldnt have gone in

my dick still harder than old gum

Viral : ut ya throat up wit venemous blades,i stay above the bar givin u a hennessy chase/
my enemies face burnin throats till their hearts explode in a menacing rage//

i stay on topic, speciffically nothin at all, im jst fuck wit ya'll, i really base it around murder drugs muffins n bras/so

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Tue May 29, 2007 8:56 am

appreciate the feed.....wheres the rest?....people be slackin maaaaynnneee

precise · Post by **precise** » Tue May 29, 2007 9:13 am

haha this was dope, i enjoyed readin it, altho there was absolutely no point to it really it was just good wholesome family entertainment, kinda thing you wanna read to ur kids around a campfire while they drink jackdaniels n eat baby cookies.

plex had some nice rhymes, overall tho he was just all about the random jokes, the condom line was fuckin funny haha

virals multies were kickass, n alot of the lines were dope as hell

i stay on topic, speciffically nothin at all, im jst fuck wit ya'll, i really base it around murder drugs muffins n bras/so let me flip it n stick ya wit toxic liquids n rock the earth till the axis pivots shatterin da core exposin stuffin n all//

^^^ that was one of my favorite bars, n i like the closing as well

overall this was some dope shit, good job guys

RH1NO · Post by **RH1NO** » Tue May 29, 2007 10:04 am

let me flip it n stick ya wit toxic liquids n rock the earth till the axis pivots shatterin da core exposin stuffin n all//

word good job fellas

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Tue May 29, 2007 10:07 am

thanks for the feedback everyone

This was probably put together in 20 minutes.

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Wed May 30, 2007 1:01 am

thats an accurate estimate!!....FEEEEDBAACCCK...n ill return the favor

*.HarleQuin.* · Post by ***.HarleQuin.*** » Wed May 30, 2007 5:49 am

we got Viral seeing Harlem secretly,cheating on Chicago and im fucking her tomorrow <<<!!!!!!
lmao im soo kicking u ass for that one...
anyway VERY good both of u ..viral nice to see u back so umm our secrets out man..; )
and plexie i dunno what ur on about when i was with ladysam it was great
keep em coming idiots

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Wed May 30, 2007 7:30 am

*.HarleQuin.* wrote:we got Viral seeing Harlem secretly,cheating on Chicago and im fucking her tomorrow <<<!!!!!!
lmao im soo kicking u ass for that one...
anyway VERY good both of u ..viral nice to see u back so umm our secrets out man..; )
and plexie i dunno what ur on about when i was with ladysam it was great
keep em coming idiots

wat to do! wat tooo dooo!!...lol....thanks for the feed geek!!

Gutta · Post by **Gutta** » Wed May 30, 2007 7:32 am

Too many questions, not enough answers
Got me stressin, cuz the cops in my section wanna can us
Got the news reporters with they camcorders, get the cameras,
They can't stand us, only wanna see me on TV
when i click the hammers, so they can predict the damage
I wanna get the grands so i can set up my summer plans
Pop open another can, me and my man's gonna make it 2 summer Jam
Cutting grams, trying 2 get my doe together
in strands of rubber bands, Here i stand
more educated and dedicated to make it
my life is drug and sex related, I'm never separated
from what I'm obligated to, this life is hard 2 make it through
I'm the one U gon' start realting to, plus I'm never fakin moves
U C my necessities of livin, keep tempting me 2 be chillen
I say rest in peace to the beats i be killin, from rhymes i recite
only fit for a freak, at night, I'm on the streets cuz thats when the freaks come out
Plus they talking out they ass like they dont really need they mouthes
If you down, U can count on me, with or without a salary
I'm always down to be, chillin, around these villains
no matter how many killins they've committed
U C its hard 2 keep it real when u trapped in these 40 story buildin's
As for me, I'm trying to get my hands on these grands or these millions
Papes I'm always down to chase, help me get out this place
or help me find my place around them pearly gates

U feel me? not my best verse but cha kno

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Wed May 30, 2007 8:36 am

go introduce urself a lil bit in the new users section...

Gutta · Post by **Gutta** » Thu May 31, 2007 5:21 am

^^^^^ how i do that? wat u think of ma verse?

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Thu May 31, 2007 5:48 am

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Gutta · Post by **Gutta** » Thu May 31, 2007 12:28 pm

like Big P being questioned about his Obesity, where the fuck did i lose my decency
we got Viral seeing Harlem secretly,cheating on Chicago and im fucking her tomorrow

I like that bar cuz damn i dont know dat fool Big P but he prolly fat. haha, and that fucking Chicago Line is tight its a good play on words u got there. pretty good verse. holla.

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Mon Jun 04, 2007 4:13 pm

157 views!!!...and 13 replies?...most not even actual feedback?!..WRECKLESS!!

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