damn

[complexity]

release madness like a disease!
leaking out on the streets, dreams shot out of brains
bleeding, arms remains found, seemless beings
seen through the eyes of god only, lonely, leaving
this world behind, corpses, death, caskets, breathing
the world spins on, traffic moves, light shows thru the trees
a new born is seen through the womb, almost clean
family fills the room, gleams of joy, screams, laughing
a boy, who believes nothing is wrong, toys, a lawn
he becomes a teen, than an adult, gone from home
moves on, but now he is all alone, than finds a girlfriend
who turns to a wife, marriage, carriage, kids, bibs
long fights at night, slides out the crib, lights out
in his white house, starts selling weed than crack
and coke, starts to smoke to much of the supply
shows up at his folks, extremely high, both have died
unclose relationships broke, eyes cry, takes his dope
and gets fried, on his way to church a bullet glides
by his head, fast, wide, high, low, than he dies

[RH1NO]

nice little roller coaster ride ya got there
i liked it

[-TraMaTiK-]

i liked this plex..ur stuff has great imagery and i respect that...my fav lines tho were...

family fills the room, gleams of joy, screams, laughing
a boy, who believes nothing is wrong, toys, a lawn
he becomes a teen, than an adult, gone from home
moves on, but now he is all alone, than finds a girlfriend


nice work tho man...-PeaCe-