I wrote this a long time ago... I never finished it... It's got a bit of a poetic feel to it, more towards a melodic flow than anything hard-hitting...
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You believe what you're told…
The demons have thrown
You the ultimate dream, you grab a hold of it, squeeze
Only to see it was a scheme you were sold…
They leave you alone as long as you pay for your freedoms
The ways of the leaders are bleeding the way,
We're treated as slaves, defeated through ways
Of plaguing cerebrums…
Our brains have been treated…
Corporate convenience, the fortress of Jesus
Has seen us consorting, even reporting
Believing and forging the forces of freedom…
The course is defeating original thought…
These criminals brought all sorts of minerals,
Scoring residuals, forced individuals
Addicted to horse…
This fix is of course, substance dependency
Such a propensity that men can be subject,
Defensively numb, the invention of drugs set
The public its destiny…
The trouble's intensity increases with time,
These pieces of crime combine and complete,
Leave us blinded and meek,
It's the minds of the weak that they're leaving behind…
The schemes are sublime; controlling the masses…
The holiest caste is passed the unfolding,
The plan is unknowing, the planet is slowly
Owning its casket…
The phoniest mask is attention diversion…
Sent to the servants who service this menace,
Who fervently threaten the earth and its tenants,
This message is urgent…!
Chorus
This message is urgent! The rest of this verse
Is meant to concern the rest of the earth
With death and deterrence…
The message you heard is meant to render you nervous…
Total control is where the end of the earth is…
This message is urgent! The rest of this verse
Is meant to concern the rest of the earth
With death and deterrence…
The message you heard is meant to render you nervous…
Total control is where the end of the earth is…
When the plan is complete, the planet will cease
To inhabit the meek, the weak will be banished…
The people who managed to seek this advantage
Are savagely evil…
The average belief will be completely destroyed…
The elite seem devoid, avoiding retreat,
Poised to defeat our choice to be free,
Even when freedom is voiced…
We're seen as the noise in their ruling of silence…
Their schooling of violence is mindlessly fueling
This fighting and dueling, they're blinding and using
Our uselessness wisely…
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The entire topic could have been a little more specific.Our brains have been treated…
Corporate convenience, the fortress of Jesus
Has seen us consorting, even reporting
Believing and forging the forces of freedom…
The chorus was straight.
Vocabulary was on point, though it did seem to be overkill in a few spots.
word...I'll leave more feedback later.
It's nice to see a new legit member.
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pretty good, i mean the scheme was dope as hell, just took a while for me to get it, the lyrics and rhyming were dope, the vocab was outstanding, i didnt really see a specific topic, but it still was worth the read, you definitely impressed me, i thought you'd be just another new wack emcee, keep it up man, welcome to Illest Lyrics, stay active
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