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its that simple
the meaning of life is as easy as spittin on instrumentals
but more difficult
than fathoming thoughts that could split your temple
in a split second
it happens life flashes n you see what you been given
takes the glimpse
of tragedies like crashes just ta see how you been livin
its like they say
take it fa granted before ya know it its gone
life is too short
ta be livin wrong one day ya here then ya gone
then reality sinks in
n ya realize that in the blink of an eye it could change
ya feel like ya sinkin
thinkin what id could a been like ta die in that moment of rage
but in ya mind
ya open the cage n tell yaself it was close but ya rewrote the page
pain restricting
my will ta breathe is like my lungs wear a harness
thought it was all over
but im findin ways out of the darkness
like im blind
but it wasnt my time i find sight through my minds eye
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You forgot a link.
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^^ dam good look
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Post by Lawgix »

yeah this wasn't the best that i've seen u drop... but all in all it was okay... kinda deep... felt where u were comin from... it wasn't bad but like i said wasn't the best

i'd give it a 5/10 keep it up tho i see some potential
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thanks for the feed uppin
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Post by complexity »

i would give it a 7/10

good effort and one of your best drops IMO
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I liked it, short and sweet. Its one of your better drops and you've come a long way since you joined IL, good work and keep it up
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