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White - Mac
Red - Ghost


Collabo on the Scene, Like Rambo On A Beat,
Spitten wit the Heat, like I Got Ammo In My Teeth,


I cant be seen, I got Cammo on these Sheets,
Bringin Heat, from the Shadows of the Streets,

Actin Hard, I'll Attack You With My Speach,
Pulled Over Everytime Mac Steps On The Street


Always burnin hot, like a Candle wit Disease,
Cant stand to us like we were Dismatlin yuh Knees,

Acient, You'll Be Vanished From The Scene,
And The Industry, Aint A Man That Can Compete


It'll always be the G-h-o-s-t in a Scandle or a Beef,
You all look bitch when it comes to Handlin your Heat,

I'll Put Gravel In Ya Teeth, Cuz Ima Vandal When I Creep
Smash Em' Through Ya Cheeks, Like My Handel Is Defeat,


Im the greatest America is Weak, you can tell cuz yuh Stamina is Beat,
Couldnt capture the crowd if yuh Cameras on Repeat, so we're Challengin yuh Team,

Wit Special Ops, As I'm Forced To Show The Immortal Flow,
Abort Ya Flow, Give You A Spinal Tap An Use It For Morse Code,


Your Sort of Slow, you'll be Lowered to a Morbid Soul while yuh Corpse is Cold,
Witta Torch to Throw, Ill Scorch that Flow that's Forced like “The Sourceâ€
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Feed would Be Appreciated
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Post by fuck haters »

yeah ima stop hatin i was feeling both rappers even mac so ummm pretty dope and ghost get at me about that beat i sent you..........
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Post by Momeijah »

Yeah its Pretty Dope. a Couple Of Bars Had iffy Flow And Multis Were ill. i Dont Get The Candle With Disease Line Though, My interpretation is That Diseases Burn Aswell? Like Herpes, Lol. But Good Shit And More Original Punches Coulda Been Used But Word.
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Post by Mac »

Thanks For The Feed Fellas.

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Post by 16 Micz »

Ghost

Im the greatest America is Weak, you can tell cuz yuh Stamina is Beat,
Couldnt capture the crowd if yuh Cameras on Repeat, so we're Challengin yuh Team,


Mac

Collabo on the Scene, Like Rambo On A Beat,
Spitten wit the Heat, like I Got Ammo In My Teeth,


this was a pretty decent collab, i hate when ppl say this to me but...i've seen better from both of u..u had some chemistry..a nice lil flow...multis of coruse the rhyme scheme wasnt too special but it fit well...

i'd give this a 7/10 keep it up..
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

fo reel thanx for the feed Micz its appreciated..

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Post by Haz »

Couldnt capture the crowd if yuh Cameras on Repeat
^^^ Kill't Every Bar , Ghost u Came hard On Dis
Mac Your firs Line wus Strait
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thanx for the feed

Upp1N more feed
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