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I Don't Dwell in the Past, I look to the future as I Excel into Rap,
I spit e-clips to cover you son like Shells in a Mack and I got one Hell of a Wrath,//

Ghost and SymBoliKuLL cant Tell em' Apart, this sick shit is Swellin yuh Heart,
Yous a toy soldier so I use a Battery Cell for my Spark, its acidic to Melt you Retards,//

And Sever Remains, were Together Insane, slice yuh veins and leave yuh to Whether the Pain,
The Wetter the Blade -- is the Fresher the Stain, the Pressure Retains to Shred Up yuh Brains,//

Comparin us is like a Lake to an Ocean, Acceleratin the Globe-When I Dedicate my Devotion,
To Elevation and Focus, Im liften up the gravity mass while you're a Weightless Explosion,//

I got so many victoms behind my bars Im considered the Chief of Police,
A Beast on these Sheets And I don't need a brush to Reach for yuh Teef,//

Your Seen in these Streets like a confused blood member Bleedin in Jeans,
Never fittin in, jus Concede to Retreat, cuz your only dope cuz you Feast on the Weak,//



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Post by Mac »

Shit Was Hott.

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And Sever Remains, were Together Insane, slice yuh veins and leave yuh to Whether the Pain,
The Wetter the Blade -- is the Fresher the Stain, the Pressure Retains to Shred Up yuh Brains,//

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Muchos gracias Bendajo!!!!

thanx for the feed man....

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Post by complexity »

bar 1 and 3 are the only ones I thought were pretty dope...

the rest seemed a little bit stretched, concept wise

7/10

nice flow as well
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thanx plex i appreciate it
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Post by -SoahKGniK- »

I Don't Dwell in the Past, I look to the future as I Excel into Rap,
I spit e-clips to cover you son like Shells in a Mack and I got one Hell of a Wrath,//

Ghost and SymBoliKuLL cant Tell em' Apart, this sick shit is Swellin yuh Heart,
Yous a toy soldier so I use a Battery Cell for my Spark, its acidic to Melt you Retards,//


those bars were really dope dog...i like the flow alot
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feed back is always takin whether good or bad....

thanx to those again who posed feed on my shit

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