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Post by complexity »

My metaphors are more complicated than relationships
half sensationlist the other half is still debated but its
funny haters make shit up and say the foulest statements
when they are the fakest fucks, on some ricky lake shit
luckily I have the patience, to sit back and take a puff
while you faggots try to catch up, to my greatness
check the rhymes I setup, than you will see why basic
emcees are left stuck, like keanu reeves in the matrix
im the apex of this game, even with the best luck
your gone with the next gust, cuz ur text is the same
n hip-hop is destined to change, ask any wordsmith
im not addressing ya name, cuz your not even worth it
mines to complex to explain, like all of my verses
i wont even call him worthless, no stress in my brain
your expressing your pain, when you bitch n complain
got scars deep in your veins, cuz he is still itching for fame
watch as Im switching the scheme, its amazing to see
like moses raising the sea, Im what your craving to be

Normal Person: (on the internet? wtf)

Complex: ( I know its pathetic, some people have trouble finding a life)

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

shit was pretty tight man, some of it ran together but it flowed well and the concept and content were tight as well.....

who was this too or was it jus a keystyle?
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by MesaR »

Yeah Pretty Nice..
Left Stuck < Matrix Line Was Fuckin Sick..
Flow Coulda Been Abit Better Just to Give It That Edge

Cmon, People Upping.
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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