Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

Untitled

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

Post Reply
User avatar
Gold.
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 21
Joined: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:40 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Untitled

Post by Gold. »

[align=center]Was bored, no theme jus spittin'...

mics i crush, i cipher with the hypest rush
who want static? you would think that lightning struck
strikin down on righteous fucks just cuz what you write just sucks
ain''t nice enough... so you start bitin stuff
biting''s a crime, and that''s not to spite McGruff
i''ll arrest ya cardiac to a life in cuffs
but ya life, seems you don''t like it much
I SPIT P.C.P. so bite me and BITE THE DUST!
ya wife''s a slut who likes my nut in her eyes and butt
SPLACKAVELLI, bringin the PRESSHA till my PIPE JUST BUST!
calm down! hold ya horses and park ya ponies
yall all just narcs and cronies....
weak heart jabronies, all ya tough talk is phony
when shit pop off yall go call Mahoney!
niggaz don''t want BEEF, cuz you all BOLONEY
i''ll rip yall apart with HAWK like TONY
i murder my prey, with every single word that i say
my verbal array will leave you in the earth to decay
i heard you was gay, in San Fran, you served the whole Bay
and ya anus doubled for a place where a gerbil could play
NAS and KURTIS, if the Gold RULED THE WORLD for a day
to my feet yall would worship and pray, I''m the God!
rockin rhythms, my competition HAS NO OPTIMISM
LIKE A PESSAMISTIC CLAUSTROPHOBIC LOCKED IN PRISON
you can NOT get with him, biohazard toxic spittin
i''ll pop ya vision and have the fibers in ya optics fizzin!
lyrics got ya sick to ya stomach like botulism
and since you suck and swallow nut you gonna vomit jizm
i''m on a mission, ya witnessin colonic dissin
in the form of thirty two bars of constant shittin
the category''s statutory of this phonic rippin
i''m Tyson in his prime and the beat is Robin Givins...[/align]
[align=center]Gold

Image[/align]
User avatar
Gold.
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 21
Joined: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:40 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by Gold. »

[align=center]Gold

Image[/align]
User avatar
Mac
Rap King
Offline
Posts: 968
Joined: Fri Nov 17, 2006 2:06 pm
Wins: 9
Losses: 2

Post by Mac »

Another Dope Piece Man. Ya Verse Was On Point, Only A Few Lines That Was Weak. But Over All This Was Fire Man, Keep Spitten Matches Man. B E Z Homie.

If You're Interested In Crews Man, You Should Peep Full TiLT.
B E Z ~
User avatar
Gold.
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 21
Joined: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:40 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by Gold. »

yeah i might do..

Thanks for looks nig, appriciate it
[align=center]Gold

Image[/align]
User avatar
SlickMex
Flow Creation
Flow Creation
Offline
Posts: 1128
Joined: Wed Feb 21, 2007 1:20 pm
Wins: 5
Losses: 4

Post by SlickMex »

Nice Drop..

rockin rhythms, my competition HAS NO OPTIMISM
LIKE A PESSAMISTIC CLAUSTROPHOBIC LOCKED IN PRISON

^That Was Funny^
Image
User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah i agree wit Mac, nice solid piece man... Pretty nice, keep it up. And yeah after a few more posts and some battles. Come over and drop a verse in FuLL TILT.....
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
User avatar
Gold.
Rookie
Offline
Posts: 21
Joined: Fri Apr 13, 2007 3:40 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by Gold. »

No doubt

Good lookin
[align=center]Gold

Image[/align]
User avatar
complexity
Elevated
Offline
Posts: 9699
Joined: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:09 am
Wins: 48
Losses: 15
Location: Maine
Contact:

Post by complexity »

I like it. Even though it had no theme, it had some creative lines.

Actually basically the second half of the flow really picked up.

The first half had dope wordplay.

The multis weren't forced and it flowed dope throughout the entire piece.

A few of the lines were weak but they were few and far between.

8.8/10. It wasn't a master piece but it surely got my attention.
Image

Check out our Vapes for great prices.
User avatar
Ambiguous Realm
Army Of Three
Offline
Posts: 3522
Joined: Sun Jan 15, 2006 3:57 pm
Wins: 46
Losses: 14
No Shows: 2
Location: Earth

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

"i heard you was gay, in San Fran, you served the whole Bay
and ya anus doubled for a place where a gerbil could play"

funny shit...this was a lil better than ur last piece.. quick to the point.. multis.. bit like my style especially without a theme...keep droppin
Image
User avatar
drunken jesus
Supreme Lyricist
Offline
Posts: 4549
Joined: Wed Jan 11, 2006 9:55 am
Wins: 12
Losses: 1
Location: Atlantis
Contact:

Post by drunken jesus »

but drop something thats yours nextime, not something you stole from a sixshot board that somebody posted in august last year lmao
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

Image
User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

ouch!
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Amazon [Bot] and 2 guests