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These Bitches! Feat. Drunken Jesus

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bitches wanna talk shit not realizin deyll get squashed quick in a mosh pit till dere flossed...picked!
like a piece of meat, a street dats beat, all pot holes, left dead ina cot..rolled
i spot hoes talkin, bots wit no brains,leavin spots n stains no hoes walkin...leave there clothes sparkin
like fourth of july fireworks, call me a tired jerk dats wired bezerk, one wrong word a bitch is tied at birth
n hung in china town n sold for her worth....teeennnn DOLLAAAASSS!, like big ben hollas
we hear ya bitch now get back to ur pen n tighten ya collar
this leash needs to be connected at all times....hooooesss...there all lies..small ties
to people wit importance, get em tossed off steeples in portions, ur mom shoulda had an abortion
ive known u for 4 days, this whore stays around after clientel lookin for fore play
high as hell hookin for more pay, back stabbing, i guess it sums it up crack nabbing
this slut hasnt had enough, till she gets bagged n tucked
stabbed n fucked, raped dragged n stuck in a dump truck
u want wat?, oh right a place for the night, try the end of ya life, from this knife
its trife..the way u livin, the days ur givin, for wat i ask?
its cuz dudes need pussy n u givin it up...well...its jst a given



i'm the greatest ever bitch so bow down before i shitstain ya second lip
looking like you need an exorcist or to pray to heaven quick to be getting thin
cause the way your belly sits, you look like you got the munches once
and the craving never quit so you hate me? but the way i look bitches gotta love me,
bitch stop buying me shots with twentys hoping you hit the right spot to fuck me
wanna rape me try and date me 'till i diss em and they making voodoo dolls
and pinatas of me but bitch you a 6 in the face a one in the waist
smelling like herb and cabbage so fuck tryna learn the average,
i'd rather let my dick burn in acid or hump a cactus before i fuck a fat bitch,
i treat hoes like a UPS man gotta come to my door with paper
before you touch the package but in lust they grabbing in a rush of passion
not thinking about closing they legs, bitch if i can't lift you over my head
best believe i'm getting over the head and any emotions i spent on a ho that pretends
like she actually knows what i said, i'll say anything to get dome then i jet
but hun i ain't tryna bluff or joke, to you getting laid 3 times is sleak
but to me? getting laid 3 times as weak like jay said bitches lie numbers don't



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Post by LadySam »

hi, lol i liked this, funny to read.

viral: urs flowed nicely, i liked most of the verse

the first part and last part i liked the most.
u want wat?, oh right a place for the night, try the end of ya life, from this knife
its trife..the way u livin, the days ur givin, for wat i ask?
its cuz dudes need pussy n u givin it up...well...its jst a given <<<liked thismost i think

dj aka meany: and you said i only ryhmed about sex lol. yours was funnyyy i liked it also.

wanna rape me try and date me 'till i diss em and they making voodoo dolls
and pinatas of me but bitch you a 6 in the face a one in the waist
smelling like herb and cabbage so fuck tryna learn the average,
i'd rather let my dick burn in acid or hump a cactus before i fuck a fat bitch,
i treat hoes like a UPS man gotta come to my door with paper << made me laugh fav part.

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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

lmao..good shit guys both ur verses were good n on point
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Post by Viral »

thanks for the feedback u 2...i appreciate it...how do we get 22 views and only 2 people leave feed??...lol
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Post by RH1NO »

i got 25 views n 1 post lol

n e way this was fire from both funny shit smellin like herb n cabbage...lol
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Post by Kurse »

Oh yea...this must be "SLAM LYING-ASS HOEZ" month here on illest cuz i got a track almost ready that catches me on that same fever that y'all are on. Pay attention bitches...pay close attention!
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Post by drunken jesus »

Kurse wrote:Oh yea...this must be "SLAM LYING-ASS HOEZ" month here on illest cuz i got a track almost ready that catches me on that same fever that y'all are on. Pay attention bitches...pay close attention!
well to be fair most of the shit i write is either about:

doing drugs

doing sluts

doing drugs on sluts

doing sluts on drugs

or being a superhuman robot...














thats doing sluts on drugs
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by B-Bear »

this was def good..

start out with DJ's verse.. solid, as usual.. always a tight flow in ya verses man.. big ups.. nice vocab, just a solid verse man.. nothin more to sy basically

best lines:
"bitch stop buying me shots with twentys hoping you hit the right spot to fuck me
wanna rape me try and date me 'till i diss em and they making voodoo dolls
and pinatas of me but bitch you a 6 in the face a one in the waist
smelling like herb and cabbage so fuck tryna learn the average"

Viral

"leave there clothes sparkin like fourth of july fireworks, call me a tired jerk dats wired bezerk, one wrong word a bitch is tied at birth
n hung in china town n sold for her worth....teeennnn DOLLAAAASSS!, like big ben hollas "

haha.. that wass funny.. u got a damn twisted way of lookin at shit man.. lol.. that's what makes ya verses entertaining to red, cause u know u'll get some weird and tight shit.. haha.. but back to the verse..like DJ u gt a tigt flow man, lot of rhyming words and multies splashed all around.. vocab was aight.. overall a good drop and a good collab really
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