Indecisive Minds..

[~*Blitz*~]

hmm, intresting concept. Some good bars but I wasnt realy feeling it I guess b/c I dont like the topic lol. But its a good poem none the less. Good Work JJ *thumbs up*

[*.HarleQuin.*]

death brings white hands like placeable mimes
you can always view death through tha window of time
death is tha resolution of a soldier and his widdows shrine
i like this part of the poem the most, i seen the imagery u were trying to use in this, especially the spider creeping..nice drop MAC!!

[Spoof]

I liked this one! I was feeling it and it was interesting

always seein twisted capable minds
death brings white hands like placeable mimes
you can always view death through tha window of time
death is tha resolution of a soldier and his widdows shrine
^^^my fav lines! Hot hot!

[RH1NO]

tha nights are dark but an illusive mind always makes shit darker
many attemps to cover up mistakes like sketches with markers
^^ fav lines

nice drop stay up