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da guy vs. harlequin(da guy)
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you think you can walk- in- this- n -coast -through- to- murk -me//
your lines r "sick" n ya sig looks lik a walk-in-clinc-poster-for-herpes//
this chicks been around somethin like revolvin doors do//
you are a lyrical bitch but only when the votes arent for you//
ya punches r short like you bit ya writtens from willow//
i fall asleep readin ya rhymes n use ya tittis for pillows//
ill call you a vote whore be real lucky to take a win//
you said it yourself in collab you "seductively sway opinions//
rhymes are advanced leave you mental in a crawl space//
id rather grind in your ass because your pussy is like a hallway//
da guy is a skyscraper n youre a room in a project//
ill be sweepin all these cats so put your broom in the closet//
your lines r "sick" n ya sig looks lik a walk-in-clinc-poster-for-herpes//
this chicks been around somethin like revolvin doors do//
you are a lyrical bitch but only when the votes arent for you//
ya punches r short like you bit ya writtens from willow//
i fall asleep readin ya rhymes n use ya tittis for pillows//
ill call you a vote whore be real lucky to take a win//
you said it yourself in collab you "seductively sway opinions//
rhymes are advanced leave you mental in a crawl space//
id rather grind in your ass because your pussy is like a hallway//
da guy is a skyscraper n youre a room in a project//
ill be sweepin all these cats so put your broom in the closet//
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cappin ya text so i guess somethin about u can be big
why you got shit you aint apart of on your sig?//
hip hop? bitch please stop, every drop of yours in a flop
talk shit hun but everyone knows im the bitch u wanna cop//
ima make u forfeit and my name aint even typeo
fuckin homo, u could never beat this bitch solo..next time u shud no show//
lame whore jokes? you'd never be 'the spy who shagged me' if i was a ho tho
queer as folk, that was a guy u shagged homo no wonder u lost ur mojo//
u beatin anything? i guess your dick will be the only thing defeated son
pimp hand? you cant get a bitch so we all know u never mistreated one//
a few wins but in my eyes, uve really defeated none
a bunch of losses and in my eyes they just succeeded one//
why you got shit you aint apart of on your sig?//
hip hop? bitch please stop, every drop of yours in a flop
talk shit hun but everyone knows im the bitch u wanna cop//
ima make u forfeit and my name aint even typeo
fuckin homo, u could never beat this bitch solo..next time u shud no show//
lame whore jokes? you'd never be 'the spy who shagged me' if i was a ho tho
queer as folk, that was a guy u shagged homo no wonder u lost ur mojo//
u beatin anything? i guess your dick will be the only thing defeated son
pimp hand? you cant get a bitch so we all know u never mistreated one//
a few wins but in my eyes, uve really defeated none
a bunch of losses and in my eyes they just succeeded one//
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vote - da guy
da guy - probably one of your best battle verses yet, some of the multis didn't match syllables or were forced but your punchlines made up for it a few of the lines were corny but you had a few clever ones to make up for them, harlequin - probably your weakest battle verse, you showed better multis and flow in this one but the lines weren't really consistant, the sig line & the typeo line were good but after that you kinda fell off
da guy - probably one of your best battle verses yet, some of the multis didn't match syllables or were forced but your punchlines made up for it a few of the lines were corny but you had a few clever ones to make up for them, harlequin - probably your weakest battle verse, you showed better multis and flow in this one but the lines weren't really consistant, the sig line & the typeo line were good but after that you kinda fell off
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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nice battle from da guy, HQ this was by far your weakest verse. you were repetitive and borin. plus it wasnt very creative in my opinion.
Da Guy: this was your best battle verse i have ever read, it was creative and you stuck to the punches.
HQ; you verse was kinda horrible in my eyes, you had like 2 good lines and that was it, you were repetitive in your hits.
Punches- Da Guy
Personals- Da Guy
Entertainment- Da Guy
Multies/Flow- Da Guy
Clean sweep in the cats.
Vote: Da Guy
2-0 Da Guys favor
Da Guy: this was your best battle verse i have ever read, it was creative and you stuck to the punches.
HQ; you verse was kinda horrible in my eyes, you had like 2 good lines and that was it, you were repetitive in your hits.
Punches- Da Guy
Personals- Da Guy
Entertainment- Da Guy
Multies/Flow- Da Guy
Clean sweep in the cats.
Vote: Da Guy
2-0 Da Guys favor
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
Aight..Da Guys was good..
He had better personald..better flow(althought 1 bar was ehh)..He had multis..Was More entertaining..
Harlequin..is there a rule for the girls not to say the same thing to guys..cuz it gets old..n some things u jus stretched them n it got boring..
Vote Da Guy(if this was acceptable)
He had better personald..better flow(althought 1 bar was ehh)..He had multis..Was More entertaining..
Harlequin..is there a rule for the girls not to say the same thing to guys..cuz it gets old..n some things u jus stretched them n it got boring..
Vote Da Guy(if this was acceptable)
you think you can walk- in- this- n -coast -through- to- murk -me//
your lines r "sick" n ya sig looks lik a walk-in-clinc-poster-for-herpes//
it was ok, i wasnt necessarily feelin it, you could have hit harder with it...
this chicks been around somethin like revolvin doors do//
you are a lyrical bitch but only when the votes arent for you//
didnt get this one really...really just seemed like a filler nothin impressive
ya punches r short like you bit ya writtens from willow//
i fall asleep readin ya rhymes n use ya tittis for pillows//
sounds like a beginners type of punchlines...or whatever you'd ike to call this..
ill call you a vote whore be real lucky to take a win//
you said it yourself in collab you "seductively sway opinions//
the first line was a pretty good personal, a pretty decent bar overall
rhymes are advanced leave you mental in a crawl space//
id rather grind in your ass because your pussy is like a hallway//
lol you're best punchlines and bar this whole collab...
da guy is a skyscraper n youre a room in a project//
ill be sweepin all these cats so put your broom in the closet//
didnt really understand this one either...but still used nice multis
cappin ya text so i guess somethin about u can be big
why you got shit you aint apart of on your sig?//
that was an ok bar..nothin spectacular
hip hop? bitch please stop, every drop of yours in a flop
talk shit hun but everyone knows im the bitch u wanna cop//
lol pretty funny and good punch
ima make u forfeit and my name aint even typeo
fuckin homo, u could never beat this bitch solo..next time u shud no show//
nice rhyming in this one...bars didnt really measure out correctly but pretty good
lame whore jokes? you'd never be 'the spy who shagged me' if i was a ho tho
queer as folk, that was a guy u shagged homo no wonder u lost ur mojo//
your worse bar in my opinion...
lame whore jokes? you'd never be 'the spy who shagged me' if i was a ho tho
queer as folk, that was a guy u shagged homo no wonder u lost ur mojo//
lol that was a pretty hard ass punchlines..i must say u owned him on this one
a few wins but in my eyes, uve really defeated none
a bunch of losses and in my eyes they just succeeded one//
i didnt get this bar either =/ maybe im just stupid
but anyway
Multis:HQ
Personals:Da Guy
Punchlines:HQ
Similes/Metas:HQ
Rhyming/Flow/Structure:HQ
Vocab:HQ
Entertainment:HQ
Overall:HQ
i know me and Da Guy have our differences but, this is my honest vote...i dont really see how HQ was repetitive, but ok, well thats my vote, if u dont count it..i swear to god ill be pissed as hell for all that time that i have wasted
your lines r "sick" n ya sig looks lik a walk-in-clinc-poster-for-herpes//
it was ok, i wasnt necessarily feelin it, you could have hit harder with it...
this chicks been around somethin like revolvin doors do//
you are a lyrical bitch but only when the votes arent for you//
didnt get this one really...really just seemed like a filler nothin impressive
ya punches r short like you bit ya writtens from willow//
i fall asleep readin ya rhymes n use ya tittis for pillows//
sounds like a beginners type of punchlines...or whatever you'd ike to call this..
ill call you a vote whore be real lucky to take a win//
you said it yourself in collab you "seductively sway opinions//
the first line was a pretty good personal, a pretty decent bar overall
rhymes are advanced leave you mental in a crawl space//
id rather grind in your ass because your pussy is like a hallway//
lol you're best punchlines and bar this whole collab...
da guy is a skyscraper n youre a room in a project//
ill be sweepin all these cats so put your broom in the closet//
didnt really understand this one either...but still used nice multis
cappin ya text so i guess somethin about u can be big
why you got shit you aint apart of on your sig?//
that was an ok bar..nothin spectacular
hip hop? bitch please stop, every drop of yours in a flop
talk shit hun but everyone knows im the bitch u wanna cop//
lol pretty funny and good punch
ima make u forfeit and my name aint even typeo
fuckin homo, u could never beat this bitch solo..next time u shud no show//
nice rhyming in this one...bars didnt really measure out correctly but pretty good
lame whore jokes? you'd never be 'the spy who shagged me' if i was a ho tho
queer as folk, that was a guy u shagged homo no wonder u lost ur mojo//
your worse bar in my opinion...
lame whore jokes? you'd never be 'the spy who shagged me' if i was a ho tho
queer as folk, that was a guy u shagged homo no wonder u lost ur mojo//
lol that was a pretty hard ass punchlines..i must say u owned him on this one
a few wins but in my eyes, uve really defeated none
a bunch of losses and in my eyes they just succeeded one//
i didnt get this bar either =/ maybe im just stupid
but anyway
Multis:HQ
Personals:Da Guy
Punchlines:HQ
Similes/Metas:HQ
Rhyming/Flow/Structure:HQ
Vocab:HQ
Entertainment:HQ
Overall:HQ
i know me and Da Guy have our differences but, this is my honest vote...i dont really see how HQ was repetitive, but ok, well thats my vote, if u dont count it..i swear to god ill be pissed as hell for all that time that i have wasted
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