ummm.. pardon me but given a chance ill slice n artery/
smashin a clay aiken like im droppin pottery/
wit shards i bring n mix a drink wit bacardi while im partying/
you ain hard ta me leave you scarred from the bars i swing/
like weezy adams apple meet banana clip/
takin a banana shit on ya weak ass samantha grip/
leave ya bandanna ripped claimin you can handle this/
testin me thats a bad mistake/
feather pillow barricades are no match for my hand grenade/
watch ya man get sprayed lights out like a lamp wit shade/
demonic ebonics like retarded leprechauns you cant get hooked on me phonics//
constantly blowin got ya consantly chokin like im constantly holdin o's a free chronic//
my criminl mind leave ya decriminalized ill press rewind n drop lines in a biblical time//
im a giant you just a feminine size david beat goliath?? my rhymes ammendin that line//
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i always forget this shit lol
i always forget this shit lol
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too much decoration homie, its a verse not a christmas tree
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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drunken jesus
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this was alright i guess
the rhyming was cool minus all the bullshit d-as-h-es the wordplay was weak though, it either didn't really make sense or was really simple, wasn't horrible for random shittalking but it wasn't real memorable either
you're better off putting more time into verses and dropping less frequently cause you'll get the same total amount of replys if you drop 2 verses a week or 15
the rhyming was cool minus all the bullshit d-as-h-es the wordplay was weak though, it either didn't really make sense or was really simple, wasn't horrible for random shittalking but it wasn't real memorable either
you're better off putting more time into verses and dropping less frequently cause you'll get the same total amount of replys if you drop 2 verses a week or 15
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]
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