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Im Tired. Street Ft 16 micz

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Feed baq plz.



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verbaly molesting your ears,hearing my words will be ur greatest fear
ull know when the end is near,i been killing these niggas for years
and neva droped tear,for none of those queers
as a young cat i was blind and stupid,wish i can unwind time and kill cupid
cant hate love,unless u been threw it,im the fire and these bars is the fluid
devil pushing me further,but i dont wanna do it....screw it
cant express how i feel,but threw music,mentaly disturbed i need the urb too use it
or ill go crazy and loose it,i need it to abuse it
i aint equal too most people,my flow is heroin n the words is needles
filled with wickdness and evil,every day is a new sequal
most kids get stuck in the hood its sad,not knowin the soul is where
god and the devil fight,for the good and bad,people kill others for things they dont have
they see the oppurtunity they wont hesitate too grab
im tired of crying,im tired of living,im tired of niggas,im tired of women...
some times i just sit and think,its too hard too express my self
thats why i put it all in ink
i wanna go too place that i can finaly scream freedom at last,i can feel the spirit
of my niggas that past
its like they right here,but i cant see em,sometimes im jealous of them
damn i wanna be em
every body fake,when will this ever end? if u dont know ur enemy then u dont know ur freind.....
a place where u dont value money just the air u breath and the sky is sunny
knowin it can never happen...and its just rappin...n im dreamin...damnn





16 Micz


my mind glides, rule i dont abide by, visions through my blind eye
a path, i designed mine, im glad i could just find mine
informed from a wise guy, to leave the trash behind mine
my career is defined by, devines lines, destroy minds from what i write.
its alive, a reason to continue to strive, fuck the drive bys, you wont even ride by
why lie?all of my life, intelligence was something i couldnt survive by
but now im a wise guy,see through minds, with my 5 eyes
in a mental slumber, but revived by, jesus, never would he deprive lives
with my 5 knives, your future wives die,the sky i arrived by
supply highs and deny crys,energize shy guys,
all my spies lie, im deadly like those guys from july guy
lines too complex when i imply mine,no retries, waiting for replies
the time is ticking, the mind is spinning, like hes high
i've been nice from the beginning,whose rhymes are u ending,please try
ur in a terrible situation like countries going to war with crappy kings, you'll die
all my life i didnt really like happy things, but good bye




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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

16 Micz .. Hella Sick Flow ..
i Loved Tha Multies ..
it`ll Be Hella Good For an audio ..
Palabra .. i Would Listen to That ..
i Loved it ..

Street Pham ..
ya Verse Were a Lil Choppy at First ..
But U Started to Pick it Up ..
i Liked Tha Structure U Mapped Out ..

Overall Nice Collabo ..
Y`all Put it Down ..
i`m Surprised y`all ain`t Get No FB ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Viral »

nice collab...i think micz really shined in this one...dope multis...altho some were kinda...ummm wat?...lol....pharmacist i was definatley feelin ur verse...specifically



~~~devil pushing me further,but i dont wanna do it....screw it
cant express how i feel,but threw music,mentaly disturbed i need the urb too use it
or ill go crazy and loose it,i need it to abuse it
i aint equal too most people,my flow is heroin n the words is needles
filled with wickdness and evil,every day is a new sequal ~~~

that part i can relate to...lol....overall u both did pretty well...pharmacist seems to have elevated from the last drop ive seen....if ive even seen one?...i dont remember ne more....keep it up tho...id like to see more from both of you

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go0ood looks viral ..i droped some shit last time
but neva had no feed backs i guess im that hated on this site..so i barely even drop shit lol
but i got u with the ur fb.
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Post by Viral »

i doubt that would really determine it....sometimes i dont get feedback on my shit for awhile...lol......sometimes people who deserve the feedback dont get it n people who dont....do get it....its a retarted process...lol
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lol wordd i digg
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

streets your shit was hot in some parts, some parts didnt hit right, but for the most part your flow was there and your substance lacked in parts if you stepped your vocab a notch and fixed your structure up a lil bit you could spit some fire.

micz i liked your drop from beginnin to the end, some parts were off more than others, and some parts were hotter than others. but basically your ripped it, your beginnin was your best part though, your structure was that bad either.

all together nice collab you both seemed to stay on topic, and that was kool
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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