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Verbal Xstacy ft. Viral

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no matching-abilities when it comes to rapping-i-kill-a-beat drastic-humility
with a masters-agility stacking-fufilling-greed i put crack-in-the-liberty-bell

plastered-in-the-city-of-hell with bitches pretty & gritty smashing-kids-in-their-swell
adomens laughing 'till they having-pics-of-me-held with a grin thats insanity-stricting

niggas spit like they plan-to-be-living in prison listen i'm handling-wisdom
a man-with-a-mission and vision turning more fans on than a fat family-living

in tampa-so-listen i'm shanking-these-bitches thinking niggas is gangsta-that-isn't
i got no strength-or-weakness i'll bless a beat and have the best vets-retreating

then rep-the-streets with an intense-allegience with connects-to-beat-kids
with no respect-for-breathing cause they doing anything for rep-like-sequence

figure-drunken-jesus-&-viral-best-with-beats-and-verses-wanna-deny-it
niggas-come-and-see-us-that-try'll-end-hit-leaving-burning-ugly-and-dying



im-shatterin-space while spatterin-mace/
shat-in-ur-place n spat-in-her-face//

i count-money-stacks wit no amount-to-clout/
n scout-honey-cracks shit my account-is-drought//

insanity-profanitys got my vanitys-in-cavities/
now sanity-is-fantasy wen bannin-these-rapid-beats//

speak-backwards-wen-liqour-inhibits-kids/
reak-flack-wars-like-tickers-im-flickin-lids//

no-joke the-flow-tokes u-old-blokes/
go-stroke n blow-folks wit-bold-strokes//

realize-da-size my-eyes-advise/
u resize-ya-lines or he-dies-in-knives//



red = me
green = viral
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Viral »

woorrrddd....LEAVE FEEEED!
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Post by Stina »

niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice multi's. good shit from the both of you, although Viral you flip subjects like there's no tomorrow lol...

favorite lines of all:

DJ:
'a man-with-a-mission and vision turning more fans on than a fat family-living '
^ that was a good metaphor or whatever that it's called.

Viral:

insanity-profanitys got my vanitys-in-cavities/
now sanity-is-fantasy wen bannin-these-rapid-beats//

^good multis on that part

overall as you can tell I liked it for the multi's, twas good on that subject.
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i count-money-stacks wit no amount-to-clout/
n scout-honey-cracks shit my account-is-drought//

plastered-in-the-city-of-hell with bitches pretty & gritty smashing-kids-in-their-swell
adomens laughing 'till they having-pics-of-me-held with a grin thats insanity-stricting

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this was pretty dope, DJ killed it, Viral your verse was pretty tight too, i dont know what subject this was about or on but it was good. I would give this a low 8/10 collab.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by LadySam »

YAY viral u said blokes! lmao

this was fun to read.
fav lines

niggas spit like they plan-to-be-living in prison listen i'm handling-wisdom
a man-with-a-mission and vision turning more fans on than a fat family-living

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insanity-profanitys got my vanitys-in-cavities/
now sanity-is-fantasy wen bannin-these-rapid-beats//
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

lol i can tell u were both drugged up when u wrote this.. hence the title.. n e ways overall it was pretty good... nice use of multis as well
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Post by 16 Micz »

pretty dope, i hate when ppl tell me this, but ill tell u two...i've seen better from both of u...but this was pretty good imo...no offense but i think DJ outshined viral a bit..but viral was pretty dope with the multis...i guess it runs in the family...
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

This was fun to read...you guys are entertaining and you should collab about some random ass shit more often. Im to lazy to pick out my fav lines but DJ did kill this and Virals verse was dope too. And dope is a kick ass word. Tampa is the shit btw, dont hate!~
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Post by Viral »

fuck tampa!!!......thanks for the feed people!...lets get some more feeeed!!...were lackin compared to the views....thats weak as fack!!
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Post by RH1NO »

never be as cool as illinois..lmao
ne way dope ass drop i think you both were on the same level which is great in collabs no one dropped the ball it was fire i liked it nice job
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Post by Viral »

UPPIINN!!...WOOOO!!...FEEEDBACK!!..Favor will be returned
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Post by Viral »

this is the most under-rated collab ever!!...LOL!!!...ok im done
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