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We are facing a revolution of evolution...
when you got a problem, find a solution....
or the problem will solve you in the form of pollution.....
retribution, is only that wretched....
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its like the 'ny times' you gotta make the paper//
stack it high like scrapers but you hafta cry, when rapers//
take a girl by suprise, slash her eyes, and tape-her//
i'm not a hater, but sometimes I despise the creator//
fuck ya side of the story, tell me the lies later//
how the fuck can a man, think a guys greater//

WHAT THE FUCK, WHAT YOU DO TO MY GIRL.......
WHAT THE FUCK, YOU DO TO THE WORLD......
WHAT THE FUCK, WHAT YOU DO TO MY GIRL.......
WHAT THE FUCK, WHAT YOU DO TO THE WORLDDDDD.......

kurt kobains dead and i'm smelling the youth//
mothers becoming victimized and abused//
its sickening when i watch the news//
are you kidding, a man gets excused// (cuz he's bi polar)
to kick his girl all night with his shoes// (plus a high roller)
"cuz it was the chemicals in his head", but really a few boos//
i refuse to follow the same views//
that would have my girlfriend with bruises//
face oozing, thats a discrace, its confusing//
look at your race, what methods are they using//
when respect is refused n, then weapons defusing//
when the man steps-in accusing, at first she finds it amusing//
but his affection isn't proven, and his direction isn't soothing//
with his erection, moving, and protection removing//
takes a second of reflection of what he's doing//
look what we are doing, luckily this time her infection was ooozing//

WHAT THE FUCK, WHAT YOU DO TO MY GIRL.......
WHAT THE FUCK, YOU DO TO THE WORLD......
WHAT THE FUCK, WHAT YOU DO TO MY GIRL.......
WHAT THE FUCK, WHAT YOU DO TO THE WORLD.......

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you keep your point of view, i'll keep mine...
but if my point of view.. is directed at you..
then you can call yourself screwed...
We can fight this shit, an write this shit....
only action, can rewrite this shit....
Peace
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Dude you really need to sign with someone. Your lyrics are some of the best I've ever seen.
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Now you're going to get me hate, or at least yourself. Lol, I'm not even the best on the site, and this is just text not audio :)
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by the way i thought this was one of my worst pieces. lol
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aw micz is back and um tom dont get cocky now but yea this was pretty straight keep it up
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lol....about 6 more pieces for you to read ^ lmao

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Twigs wrote:Dude you really need to sign with someone. Your lyrics are some of the best I've ever seen.
put the crackpipe down
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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lmao
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good shit... i was feelin it.... keep at it.. feed my shit an ill feed on ur other shit...
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